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Quotes / The Good Days
Version 1
2 Reviews   1 Comment
"I suck hardcore, but it'll be okay."
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Poetry / Pure Glee
Version 1
2 Reviews   0 Comments
There is nothing I would like more Than to watch your heart pour With the last of your life's blood A beautiful crimson flood Just for me To watch with glee.
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Quotes / The Good Days
Version 1
3 Reviews   4 Comments
No! Don't rub it! It'll throb!
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Quotes / Life.
Version 1
4 Reviews   1 Comment
Welcome to life, it ends.
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Short Story / Interview with a Killer (unfinished)
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7 Reviews   3 Comments
Perfection is deadly. I learned that years ago. I always seemed to have this obsession. It’s an obsession that the one I fell in love with would be perfect. Well I learned the hard way that perfection is a goddamned lie. "Nothings perfect" are old words but still just as true. Why am I ranting on this you ask? It’s something you already know? This is why. I didn’t believe there could be this whole big wide world and there would never be anything that wasn’t absolutely perfect. I didn’t. I rea...
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Poetry / Alone
by astralshepherd
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Not barking dogs
by Richglimmers
I'm not really sure what idea you had oing at the start of this, and it seemed to falter off in some direction I'm not really all that sure of after just the first stanza. You seem to have a good idea for details though, and description, so stick with it. ^_^ Wasn't all that bad really.
Short Story / Mrs. Scarlet
by adgerboy
Excellent. I think this embodied the feelings of every person who has loved someone, and that someone just resorted to ignoring them in the end to say that they did not return such. I love the way you moved a whole and somewhat touching story into one small short. I find that rare in short stories that are actually short, I'm usually left confused and wondering what in the world I just read. But this did no such thing. Bravo. ^.^
Short Story / Victim of loneliness
by caintubal
I'm so lost... But it did seem strangely reminescent of the lady and the tiger, don't ask me how though. I have no idea how to even assume what she may have said to him...So I'll leave that subject. There were a few spelling errors, and as stupid as it may sound, Why did the neighbors have spears anyway? I'll re-read and see if I can figure this out. ^.^
Short Story / Totally Crap dream I had.
by ork1
I'll give you credit, it certainly had that dream air with everything happening all at once in one confusing mass of occurances, but, being as crowded as it was I often lost my place and had to re-read multiple lines. There seemed to be no actual ending to any one happening, which I guess works well with the whole dream sequence theme, but still bugs me. And there were multiple words I think you used in the wrong context, but, again, that could just be me.
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