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AGE:
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LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 12
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 12
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our life revole around the sun Without the sun, there is no day or night No times to play or times to fight Without the sun the is no life she tell the one she love she'll be back by tonight and maybe, just maybe, she'll be back by tonight Because there is a problem tatooed on her mind A problem, a problem she just may not make right She say she love them when she love someone else Sadly takes down the picture that lived on the shelf And she say , "I love him, but I love someone else" It just...
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I wish my life was off standby Instead of watching other peoples live pass by I wish my life was off standby Cause I see some say they wish they'd die I wish I could be of help To those who's lives are in need I wish I could be of help Instead of watching our nation bleed I wish I could make them happy The people who are scared to show emotion I wish I could make them happy Not just to stop this worthless commotion I wish there was such a thing as a happy-ending Like in the fairy-tales I was ...
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This is a very nice poem. The greatest gift comes in small packages; children. their minds are so clean, they act what they feel. Very beautiful. But this poem also reminds my of our lost innocence and how much we have changed through the years. Fantastic work, keep doing it.
It is true! NO one is really sane. Everyone is mad in their own way, itia amazing too how everyone has their own definition of sanity and insanity. Ones definition might contradict anothers, therefore, no one is really sane =] I like these quotes.
First thing I noticed was the beautiful yet dark imagery. "The music of the city, bleeds through our skins. " I really do love this line, although I can't quite explain why. Beautiful, simply beautiful
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