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Around this time of year I like to church-hop. I never go for the service but I like to show up during open-hours when the choirs practice. I know some of the singers from school, town, through mutual friends. A few nights ago I was nodding off in the second-to-last pew in St. Thomas’s, one of the larger churches I frequent. Its stoic spirals and steeple remind me of the past. Two stained-glass windows—which were situated at opposite ends of the church and comprised nearly all of the wall on ...
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This is a great take on a commonly debated aspect of Christianity. AA pretty accurate paraphrase of what I learned in Christian school. But i'd like to see more elaboration at the end of the last paragraph where the author says this concept might require more thought.
Great take on perfection in relation to self. Very true. A bit ironic you submitted it for review though. ha
I've wrestled with this concept many times, glad to see a quote on it. Great find.
This was a nice piece. First, in the second line you used the wrong "their" and in the last line you used the wrong "you're". ok. I was into your message and what you were trying to do here but I found myself getting bored with your examples. I would have liked to see a bit more action or perhaps a little more elaboration on what you thought of these men. But again, great start, keep it up!
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