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Flash Fiction / Church-Hopping
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Around this time of year I like to church-hop. I never go for the service but I like to show up during open-hours when the choirs practice. I know some of the singers from school, town, through mutual friends. A few nights ago I was nodding off in the second-to-last pew in St. Thomas’s, one of the larger churches I frequent. Its stoic spirals and steeple remind me of the past. Two stained-glass windows—which were situated at opposite ends of the church and comprised nearly all of the wall on ...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / I Didn't Write This...
This is a great take on a commonly debated aspect of Christianity. AA pretty accurate paraphrase of what I learned in Christian school. But i'd like to see more elaboration at the end of the last paragraph where the author says this concept might require more thought.
Quotes / Perfection
Great take on perfection in relation to self. Very true. A bit ironic you submitted it for review though. ha
I've wrestled with this concept many times, glad to see a quote on it. Great find.
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Is he the one?
This was a nice piece. First, in the second line you used the wrong "their" and in the last line you used the wrong "you're". ok. I was into your message and what you were trying to do here but I found myself getting bored with your examples. I would have liked to see a bit more action or perhaps a little more elaboration on what you thought of these men. But again, great start, keep it up!
Flash Fiction / liar from hell
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