reylen's profile
AGE:
23
LOC: Australia
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 14
LOC: Australia
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 14
I am a uni student, studying Banking and International Finance.
I started writing for English at high school and haven’t stopped since. I am good at all multimedia (Film, writing, drawing, musical instruments, photography and computers)
Writing will be my hobby for life and I draw stories out of small things that have happened to me, songs, life experiences. They all usually come to me as the first paragraph and develope from there. There’s no plan to my stories. I tend to not rewrite the whole thing, just bits and pieces.
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I failed to achieve his potential.
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I’ll never forget the sound of a train horn echoing through the mountains as it was pulling into the station. How can I? It wakes me from dreams. It haunts me. It’s always everywhere I go. Nothing will change. How those three words can be so wrong, I will always know. Everything has changed, through that day. “Darlene, why is it every time you hook up with a guy, that you ring me up and taunt me with the details.” “Well, we all know that you aren’t with anyone, why should you be missing out? ...
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The cold steel sword pressed against my neck, one slip, one sudden movement, and it would pierce my skin. From that moment I knew that the war I was trying to escape from was right in front of me. Why wasn’t I more cautious? Why did I jokingly take onboard my Dad’s request? I wonder if I lie here, still enough, that they would think I was asleep. “Get up!” said the voice that belonged to the sword. I had two choices, I either did what he said or my death would be swift. “Get up!” This time th...
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Chapter 1 Her life changed in that moment. To discover something about yourself that you believe wouldn’t happen to you. In the community’s eyes, they would still her as the same person but if they only knew. She always thought that the war was an injustice and that they were still human, only with special abilities. But now, they are reduced to hide away from the family they’ve only known and fear for their own lives, instead of having the support they need to control what was happening to t...
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I’ll never forget the sound of a train horn echoing through the mountains as it was pulling into the station. How can I? It wakes me from dreams. It haunts me. It’s always everywhere I go. Nothing will change. How those three words can be so wrong, I will always know. Everything has changed, through that day. “Darlene, why is it every time you hook up with a guy, that you ring me up and taunt me with the details.” “Well, we all know that you aren’t with anyone, why should you be missing out? ...
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"I, questioning your questions and wanting to answer your life’s burdens" something is wrong here. Can someone even use questioning someone's questions to answer life's burdens. It doesn't make sense Apart from that I thought it was pretty good. A great way to describe things
This is better than all the other I have seen. It can also be changed to 'I failed to achieve his potential' to talk about loss and the pressures put on other family members.
the examples given in the details for your chosen opportunities, don't really match your sentence. You are supposed to 'tell a story' in 6 words. I don't get what story your are trying to tell.
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