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LOC: Dover, NH
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LAST LOGIN: February 23
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The empty fields beneath my feet Full of lies crime and deceit The empty fields beneath my feet The crows moan to an unknown beat Sadness flies across my brow Happiness why leave me now? Please plead my quiet vow Sadness flies across my brow Ideas come But none know how Ideas go Across my brow Come and go Like ocean flow Thoughts become And thoughts will go The empty fields beneath my feet Where living souls death will reap The empty fields become my feet Where I will grow and learn to weep H...
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I opened my eyes to a gray wall, a broken window, some clothes, and a torn blanket. I take a deep breath and realize, "This is my life." I walk to my kitchen in the next room, and scrape what i can out of the jar of food i ate last night. My bare feet drag accross the worn linolium floor. By now i have gotten use to the smell of rancid garbage and the scurrying of rats and other unwelcomed animals. I throw away the old, cold, dry pizza on my table. and i sit in my chair.
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rise and die doesn't ryme. no offence but im kind of confused. its good but im not sure what its about. it seems like you make a sudden change from bread to dying.
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i think it is very good, although its not my kind of poetry. i like how its a few different points of view, and within the different points of view there are what someone says and what someone thinks. once again, its very good.
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