AGE:
54
LOC: Richmond, KY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 20
LOC: Richmond, KY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 20
omadhaun
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Once ! Those days of yore hast gone , but ah O merriment ! In dreams of thine , All sweet kisses , kiss thy lips - Where I hold thee , call thee mine . Edenic's view so far , so cold ! Through window's pain of night - I dree ! Tens of thousand stars once loved But oh , there once was thee ! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~  ...
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The Fire ! The Deil's game of constant dree Pangs with every thought - a sigh ! Such a fool that feeds his sorrow ... Through waning hours - I die ! I die ! Why should I in listless stour Yearn for fire - 'tis sure to pass , Even if thou kissed me sweet - Sure to lose thee , O bonnie lass ! So thus I pine , and thus I wend Unto a nowhere place of nane , Alone ! Alone ! Immured in madness - What is worth Edenic's Pain ? &n...
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65 Comments
Take Me ! Let thy sword upon me crash Arrows upon me fall, That I shall be slain , Alas ! From thy heart , that thralls Me every moment's pang Every single breath , Why thy kisses , kiss me not ? Take me ! Take me ! Death . ~~~~~~~~~~~~ &n...
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someone is reading and its me ... not gonna say whether its good nor bad .... if non-fiction or just creative mind , i like how and what u craft - ive been following every single one - so i shall only comment on this one for the other two - waits for more !
your choice of words are sublime , direct and most beautiful in terms of love ! i guess u couldn't insert my name in the place of jim -- LOL ... very beautiful and nicely crafted write young lady !!!
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