AGE:
100
LOC: Glendale, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 10
LOC: Glendale, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 10
in the fleeting, misty, and shadowy corners of my mind. where mostly dwell a chaotic remembrance of past times, never dwelling on anything that might mean something. i stumbled upon a thought that bound me deep into who i am, a vivid dream of happiness and delirium.
Items
Version 2
0 Reviews
0 Comments
There was a pause in the glowing plasma trodes that flowed from the XE17 reactor. A series of lights formed in a projected flat screen wall that floated beneath the black tube rails attached to an angled receptor. It processed each frame in nano-seconds. Dr. Aurk stood beside the filament glass protector, the floating laser screen manipulated by his index finger using interference in each sequence of light between receptors. The polygon graphs turned in parallel with each movement. He watched...
Version 1
4 Reviews
1 Comment
Esther’s white gown swayed weightlessly with the wind over the green expansive lawn where their laughter once echoed among the chirping birds and the rustling dried brush. Zeph stared at her framed photo on the wall, the fading grayish image shined in the reflected window next to the patio table where they used to have coffee and warm cookies micro-waved in his cramped kitchen. They parted ways, she never gave any reason, all she said was that she needs some time, just a space to think ...
Version 1
3 Reviews
2 Comments
It was never me It was never from anything I've done in the past Or anything that I've felt sitting next to a wind chime On a warm breezy afternoon Nor was it the waves or the seagulls either Singing with the shimmering sea It was not the chilly mist of morning dew in spring It was her smile, it was the flare of her hair The singing chorus in her eyes Her gentle heartbeat Because with her I hear the melody of air The soothing hum of the evening sky With her I feel words, art, and poetry insid...
Version 1
1 Review
0 Comments
the slow, quiet whisper of her breathing awakened into a loud screaming wail. i rushed inside the damp cavern wall of her self-made dungeon, inside her dark choking mind. there, chained to her faded past, she wails and weeps in self disdain seeking absolution that will never come. for it is to her, even death itself cannot heal. i have always been there for her, inside the trenches of her dying veins beneath the surface of her withered skin. i never left her. never. not for a brief moment. al...
Version 1
0 Reviews
0 Comments
I still remember our lost melody, the soothing syncopated twirling of interlaced notes and misplaced sharps, the misconstrued flats, the humming keys in the candle lit corner of our favorite spot. We love the way the tunes started away from the dull phrasing of the four-fourths rhythm, the major chords un-synchronized, the harmony an abstract music of a non-lyrical hymn - the notes between the notes, the rhythm inside the rhythm. It still bears our long chats over cheap wine. The occasional m...
[ View all items ]
Reviews
Very powerful poetry. I can sense the emotions and the passion you had when writing this. The rhythm and the timing is perfect, it was short and terse but contains a lot of content beneath the words. There is depth - more meaning to what's being said. What is it? I'm not sure - but that's not important. I did 'feel' it which is what counts in poetry and in art. Excellent work.
It's always hard to critique a poem since they're very abstract. You feel it rather than fully understanding in a logical context what's being said. You catch glimpses of the writers emotion, his/her state of mind but nothing more. It is left for the reader to decide and to conclude in a non-literary context the vastness of it. This piece did just that for me. Excellent short and concise poetry.
That was beautiful poetry, I can feel that you wrote this from your heart. You conveyed perfectly what's going on in your life and I can feel your emotions as I read. Reading this, I felt what you're going through and that it must be very difficult for you. All I can say is just hang in there and hope that things turn out for the best. The poetry rhyme and rhythm was well crafted though there are a few lines that didn't go well with the flow, certain syllables were short which didn't help wit...
[ View all reviews ]
Favorites
People













