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Hey I would like to thank everyone who has reviewed my work your reviews have helped me a lot. I would like to ask that you please review some of my peices that have gotten no attention. Thank You When I Told You I Loved You Thank You <3 I Miss You Live Free As a young, aspiring writer I love to hear feedback from more accomplished people. Please make a point to review these poems because I would love to hear what you have to say! Thank you so much! -Danielle

I couldn't let go I couldn't hide no matter how hard I try I could never just walk on by. Your gentle kiss, your heart stopping gaze they got me out of my mind You have me all in a haze. Could you tell me what you did To make me feel this way Because before you came along, boy, I almost let my love just runaway. You saved me from falling apart You caught me and put me back on start If it wasn't for you I couldn't have guessed what I would do, I guess all I have to say is... Thank you.

Your kiss is like magic Your touch melts my heart Your eyes hypnotize me Your words make me never want to be apart. Your ebrace is warm Your heart beats within me Your laugh is music Your arms are where I always want to be Your breath is sweet your feelings I'll never doubt Your everything I ever dreamed of Your love I couldn't live without.

When I told You I love you I swore I'd always be there I'd give anything and everything for you And I will always care I'll support you through your weaknesses I will admire your every strength I promised I'd bring you happiness when it feels like all you have is sorrow. For better or worse I will always love you With every beat of my heart

Hold me in your arms tonight Promise me everything will be alright Tell me how you feel inside and forever in your arms I'll hide Home is where I am right now Without you I just wouldn't know how Why can't you stay here every second of every day I hate knowing that soon you'll have to go away.