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LOC: Canton, OH
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 13
LOC: Canton, OH
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 13
I’m a 14(had to change age on profile because i wasn’t allowed to review mutare content. What is mature anyways) year old African American girl. Unlike most people my age I have an extreme like of writing, philosophy, and history. I have not yet mastered any of these things (though who truly can), but I am trying.
Like any other kid I have many hobbies. I like basketball, softball, reading mystery novels, playing games on the computer, music, silence, and tons of other activities.
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The person next to you says memorizing this is going to be hard. Then you say, “Hard like the first working day of track hard. And you’ve been doing a wall sit for ten minutes but it really wasn’t ten minutes because you’re in Tausch Time and everything in this type of time is doubled. You want to cry but you can’t because you know if you do you’ll fall and cause the whole team to start over. So you just sit there wanting to give up. Then you hear coach blow his whistle twice and you have to...
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I look back on the past and realize I am just like the Earth, always circling the Sun.
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Killing a person is like ending a long over due relationship. If you over think it to much you end up not doing it at all. You just go back to the way you were always looking back to that day thinking about how things would have turned out if you just had done it. Always regretting not doing it but, some how relived that you deiced not to. Relationships can always be repaired to a state that you are comfortable with but ending the existence of some one can never be repaired. It will always b...
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Devil’s Creed Black stripes with ball and chain Four more years and I’m insane. Parole has lost its glistening bliss She saved me with her deadly kiss. I ran in the streets with tremendous glee, Only to find I was never freed. Now she has me round her finger, Pure lust and greed makes me linger. Through the void I see a shape, White hot fire is my fate. Semi-auto “Where were you last night?” Those were the final words she ever said to me. She unloaded shell after shell. Firing her semi-automa...
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His hood hung low, covering his face in shadow. The cloak draped down to his boots and floated like ribbon in the breeze. He walked with a sense of dignity and grace to the podium. He paused at the first step, then after a moments thought he proceeded up. He gave a slight nod to the man at his left and stood still. The man at his left roughly slipped the rope on to the hooded man. The hooded man turned around slowly and glanced up to the sky. He whistled a soft and angelic tune. A mockingbir...
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I am sorry. The cold-hearted machines called government and politics do not understand that falling in love for another person is not a choice. That instantly loving a person cannot be forced so they should not assume it could be. I hope that your husband and your future is better.
There are only two problems I can see. One is with the line "As ordered did something that they considered productive, take shots at a bar." I am guessing you just forgot to add the word they before did. The other is that you put know indication that El was reaching to shake Cam's hand. Overall, I like it and can see that the two ex partners working together is probably going to be funny and interesting.
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Wow. It was somewhat dark but also pretty humorous. I was not that surprised that Michelle did not kill Rod because even though she wants that renewed excitement in life she understands that Rod would not stop her because he loves her and she wants a sort of struggle from him. For the title how about "Anything but the Same Thing" or "Unchanged Life". About what is missing, I could not really feel that anything was. I liked it.
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