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AGE: 22
LOC: Canton, OH
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 12

     I’m a 15(had to change age on profile because i wasn’t allowed to review mutare content. What is mature anyways) year old African American girl. Unlike most people my age I have an extreme like of writing, philosophy, and history. I have not yet mastered any of these things (though who truly can), but I am trying.
   Like any other kid I have many hobbies. I like basketball, softball, reading mystery novels, playing games on the computer, music, silence, and tons of other activities.
  

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Young Adult / High
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            It was perfect just as I had envisioned it. Like flying only you end up just slouching on the couch the rest of the day. You kinda see strange colors and shapes the first time you get high(not like in the movies though), but after that you feel the effect. Then you just relax and calm down until you don’t even care anymore. It’s sorta like gettin’ drunk with out the hangover. At least that’s what I tell...
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Poetry / For You
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If you promise to stay I’ll promise to be here If you promise not to die I’ll promise to keep on living If you give me your time I’ll give you my all If you give your heart I’ll give you my soul  
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Peace of Mind
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The person next to you says memorizing this is going to be hard. Then you say, “Hard like the first working day of track hard. And you’ve been doing a wall sit for ten minutes but it really wasn’t ten minutes because you’re in Tausch Time and everything in this type of time is doubled. You want to cry but you can’t because you know if you do you’ll fall and cause the whole team to start over. So you just sit there wanting to give up. Then you hear coach blow his whistle twice and you have to...
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Quotes / Earth and Sun
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I look back on the past and realize I am just like the Earth, always circling the Sun.
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Deaths
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Killing a person is like ending a long over due relationship. If you over think it to much you end up not doing it at all. You just go back to the way you were always looking back to that day thinking about how things would have turned out if you just had done it. Always regretting not doing it but, some how relived that you deiced not to. Relationships can always be repaired to a state that you are comfortable with but ending the existence of some one can never be repaired. It will always b...
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Flash Fiction / Sharp
Ok I'm just going to get to it. It's a dark fiction peice in more than just the obvious way. Yes it's extremly troubleing that he is in love with children, to put it lightly, but its even more troubleing that he can't find help even when he is searching. It's a good pecie just dark and I feel you articulated his struggle well.
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Flash Fiction / The Mirror
I can relate to this. It seems like the moste beautiful girls don't understand what they see as flaws are really just signs that they're human and make them look all the better.
These were just what I needed. They're good for a nice chuckle. My favorites are the fifth and the last motivation.
To answer the two questions in your note, yes. I liked the weaving of the game Life into, what I am going to assume is the introduction, your autobiography. It's an ingenious way to give time frame for the beginning and to almost summarizes some of our life. To elaborate more on the reason why i feel you've succeeded at making it interesting is because I'm sixteen and lets face it if you can draw a kid in my age you should have much problem drawing in other people. I will admit though after r...
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