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AGE:
31
LOC: Liverpool, TX
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 23
LOC: Liverpool, TX
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 23
I am a 30 year old Kindergarten teacher who loves to write. I currently have a couple of short stories, but I want to someday finish a novel that I have been working on.
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It is deep within the silence that one's true madness is fully revealed.
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It is deep within the silence that one's true madess is fully revealed.
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It is deep within the silence that one's true maddess is revealed.
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It has been forty-nine days, six hours and three minutes that I have been held here in captivity. I remember my kidnapping as if it had happened yesterday. The tall, heavyset man watched me walking across the gas station parking lot. He stepped out of his dark blue truck and slowly sauntered into the store, never taking his eyes too far from me. At the time I did not think much of it. Men look at me all the time. I assume that it must be my tantalizing beauty that they are attracted to, alth...
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Tears streamed slowly down my cheeks, like a river flowing towards the ocean, as I turned the pages of our dusty family photo albums. Although I have gone through these albums several times throughout the years, I never found it to be this difficult before. Maybe the heart wrenching pain has surfaced this time because I sit here alone. I am not with my family, who would normally crowd around me and tell their favorite stories about the events that surround the mystery of the photos that fill...
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I like what you are saying. The only thing i would change is to remove the parenthesis and use commas instead.
I like where you are going with this, but I think it would be better if you used closed it is nothing, but when it is open I can see everything.
I really enjoyed this. There is only one part that does not fit the theme of this poem. The stanza that begins with "Hear..." The second line just does not fit here. Throughout the poem, you are trying to convince her to love you, but here you seem to be saying that none of this is for her. Did you mean to do that?
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