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AGE: 19
LOC: Auburn Hills, MI
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 29

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Don't say you've changed, I know better I'm done listening to all of your lies Your not getting better, you're only getting worse With every new promise you make to me, you're just creating another lie, more empty words And you know it too, don't act like you don't, we both know you'll never change So stop trying to make me proud...and stop trying to make me feel bad for you This little game of self pity is getting old And frankly my dear..I'm getting sick of playing
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Don't say you've changed, I know better I'm done listening to all of your lies Your not getting better, you're only getting worse With every new promise you make to me, you're just creating another lie, more empty words And you know it too, don't act like you don't, we both know you'll never change So stop trying to make me proud...and stop trying to make me feel bad for you This little game of self pity is getting old And frankly my dear..I'm getting sick of playing
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you wonder why I held on you ask me why I even care while I sit and go over what went wrong and you still sit there unaware of how much you really meant to me and everything we were supposed to be all those stupid plans we made all the stupid games we played all those pointless fights we had and all the wonderful moments too every time you made me mad even though we always knew no matter how much went wrong we somehow were right where we belong so when you ask me why I care I want you to know...
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Poetry / The lost love
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You say that you still love me and I wanna make us work But u have no idea baby how much it hurts To tell u that I still love u too But not be able to do a damn thing about it Or maybe u do know And u can easily hide shit But Im going crazy over here Wanting you so bad it hurts Wishing that youd call me So I can just hear those words Youre the only one that can make me feel this way And I had you once before and yet I threw it all away Because my world was crashing, and I know that yours was ...
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Poetry / photos
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Life is like a photograph, sometimes its white, sometimes its black Sometimes its dressed in colors galore, But then life turns bad as people expect more and more After awhile it just to much to handle You wanna blow it away like when you blow out a candle Some people think they have it bad when they make it bad for themselves When the truth is that they could make it better by just letting someone else help The ones who have the real problems dont make it such a big deal They keep it to them...
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Haiku/Senryu / - MAKEOVER -
I dont quite understand this writing, well I understand the fact that its about someone getting a makeover but other than that I dont quite see the point to it maybe there isnt a deeper point and Im just being picky and critical (I apologize for that its late) but if there is I suggest rewriting this to convey that point.
Haiku/Senryu / Wash Day Meditation
I like this one, its calming
Limericks / Just Because
I like this one, its very creative and has that neat lil rhyme to it makes me smile lol
Short Story / Five Joints
wow...this seems like a very unsettling story. something about this unnerves me to no end, but with good reason obviously. A murder then a suicide, thats obviously very deep and I think this story is written very well and I think you should keep writing maybe a sequel to this one, life after maybe?
Im just curious...what was the point of this? honestly...
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