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AGE: 24
LOC: Sumter, SC
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 23

My name is Christy and I’m 23-years-old.  I wrote my first short story at 7 and my first poem at 8, and I have been writing ever since.  I have a wonderful fiance, a beautiful 3-year-old little girl, and a little boy due in June.  I currently work in the health department for kids with special needs and freelance with some local magazines.

If you’re interested in getting to know me better, check out http://www.myspace.com/reasonablemadness.

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Quotes / Six Word Memoir
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After several frogs, I married up.
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Poetry / Kurenai
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Fire burned befuddled souls, And we were left much less than whole. Enslaved to darkness, our Spirits cried, Hidden somewhere deep inside. Truth emerged and ranks were split; The binding broke, bit by bit. Some remained; for them we weep-- Brothers imprisoned in demon-sleep. But we are free at last to roam; To attempt a life and build a home. These tattered forms are merely tokens; Our Spirit shall remain unbroken.
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Poetry / Kurenai
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Fire burned befuddled souls, And we were left much less than whole. Enslaved to darkness, our Spirits cried, Hidden somewhere deep inside. Truth emerged and ranks were split; The binding broke, bit by bit. Some remained; for them we weep-- Brothers imprisoned in demon-sleep. But we are free at last to roam; To attempt a life and build a home These tattered forms are merely tokens; Our Spirit shall remain unbroken.
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Poetry / Orcs & Humans
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A sharpened arrow perched to fly To meet a thousand more that soar Across the sunset-laden sky, While heavy footfalls stomp the floor. A finger shoots into the air-- A piercing sound; a child's cry. Chaos rushes here and there Beneath the sunset-laden sky. Shouts go up, and tales of lore Get passed around like broken bread. Move on and sound the drums of war; Goodbyes are better left unsaid. Two forces clash, a willing pair Of duelers wielding sword and mace Trying to catch one unaware And pu...
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I’m supposed to dream of handsome princes, You know—the kind that sweep you off your feet. One who kneels and grins and there convinces How without him I am incomplete. How unfortunate it is for me, then, That I have never had romantic dreams. Such sweetness fails for me, but then again Maybe romance isn’t all extremes. I don’t want a dozen long-stemmed roses Or chivalry as fake as it is dead. I simply want a man who, too, supposes That love is born in tearful laughs instead— If I see him, I’...
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I'm sure this was great more structured, but I think I like it much better this way. It's got a stream of consciousness vibe that I've always had a hard time achieving in a believable way. And I've had an experience like the one described in the piece, so I certainly feel connected. This style is generally not my favorite, but I really like this. Great job, overall. :-)
Poetry / Mon Papillon
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Poetry / Unbidden
I love the subject; I can certainly relate. The form is not my favorite, but it's good for what it is. I definitely think you have a talent worth shaping. I think I'd like a different title, though; something a little more unexpected and more reflective of the piece. Overall, very nice!
Poetry / Buy Her Coffee
I like this; I think it'd be great as a structured piece with rhyme and meter, but that's not everyone's forte. For being free verse, it's good; and I liked the ending. The only line that tripped me up was 10; it might flow better if you just went ahead and dropped the "only" into 11. Altogether, an enjoyable read; thank you for sharing!
Poetry / Futures
I'm not generally one for free verse, but I think this is beautifully executed and very profound. It's somehow bittersweet, and I tend to like that in a piece--that it's not necessarily one feeling or another, but a combination. The only thing I wasn't sure about was the contradiction in lines 6 and 17; the letters are being written so they can be clearly read, but then you assume the receiver can't read...however, I could also see how this could be an intentional contradiction. Either way, t...
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