pixistardust's profile
AGE:
21
LOC: KC, MO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 29
LOC: KC, MO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 29
Hello!
I am a girl who has writer’s block more often than not. I’ll go months – perhaps even half a year – without writing a single line, and then I’ll randomly drum out 7 pieces in an hour after seeing one word of inspiration.
I wish I could just WRITE on a regular basis.
A bit of background about me;
I listen to electronic dance music, metal, oldies and indie rock.
I like nature, bright colors, happy designs and glitter.
I’m loud, obnoxious and fun.
Introspective and thoughtful.
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When he speaks it feels like gradient light bursts forth onto my skin and bathes me in its shine and drenches me in its warmth. His words fornicate my mind and wrap my body into tiny little swirls around his finger. Every time I swivel around his finger and every time I tingle at his words and every time I melt at his touch, the straps that restrain his heart to mine grow tighter and the magentic force I have on him grows stronger... and he loves me more and more.
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Don't bother with me, I'm just depressed. I want all your attention. Don't mind me, I'm just obsessed with your love and your affection.
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Put your fingers inside me once more, I want to feel that you love me. You can use your tongue until it's sore, you won't be able to prove it enough. Hands touch the small of my back - the depth of my thighs - the round of my chest - with your skin on mine I know that it's love, it won't ever end. Joined with god, our skin, molded in a shape that fits perfectly like pieces sewn together. Sweat bonds and holds tighter. Don't worry about those marks on your back, you know they we...
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It's sickening how comforting the privacy of the mind can be. It's disgust is spread all out as far as my eyes can see. I feel like I'm trapped in this horror that is my brain. If I have to spend much longer with it I'll go insane. But still for some strange reason I'm in love with all my thoughts. They mean only good, barely do any harm and sure as hell don't get caught. So as long as I keep them secret I know I'll be alright. I won't be broadcasting myself to you so you can't see my...
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I'm celebrating our fall like it's the greatest thing ever. Although inevitable, I dreaded the day it would come and was hopeless the day it did. Now weeks have past and I've loved it all, I love our fall. I'm celebrating our fall like it was a rebirth, My true self hidden beneath what you wanted me to be. I was hopeless for a couple days, Now weeks have past and I'm in love with myself. I'm celebrating our fall like I won the lottery, The burden of you lifted off of me. Thought I would ...
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The first two lines don't make any sense the way they are. "Would you believe" would work a little better. The first two lines in the second stanza - WHAT is not a mirage, WHAT is solid? "What I see is not a mirage..." perhaps? In lines three and four, I don't see the reason for both question marks. "What I see?" is not a question on its own. When we go on two the last two lines it raelly doesn't make any sense - all meaning of the words is getting lost in the punctuation marks. All four line...
This is a very cute piece to read! A little bit of tongue twister, very light hearted, it puts a nice message across. Although I personally wouldn't call it a poem, it's more like a quote. Good work.
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You know how when you are reading something that is really good, your eyes move a little faster than your brain can process because you want to know what happens next sooo bad? I totally got this feeling when reading this piece. You use such good language. Some of your adjectives are so wild and they work! Hard-shirted to describe a town? I'll admit I know nothing of the writing styles or authors you named in your reviewer notes, but I will say that I think you are a good story writer. The id...
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There are a lot of a minor grammar, spelling, capitalization and punctuation errors. They look as though they're things you just missed when typing fast. A quick read through should help you find them all... try reading out loud to find things you might miss when you read silently. Also you should start a new paragraph every time there is a new person speaking dialogue. This story is told from the perspective of a 16 year old girl - you've done a good job with making the dialgue sound like th...
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