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AGE:
24
LOC: Hilton Head Island, SC
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 05
LOC: Hilton Head Island, SC
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 05
I like to sing and write songs. Poems too.
I hope to meet other creative and mind expanding individuals and have met many on Urbis. I love this community. It has helped me grow and nurture my artistry. I couldn’t ask for a better place to share my writing.
Thank you for believing in me.
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My mind is open The heart is closed Where is my love That never shows Take one look Look at me You're the reason God created apathy There are no tears to show a demon It must be funny thinking you're human Can you kill someone that loves you so much? I'd die in his arms just to feel one touch Take a drink See what's behind The mask that I wear A cross that is mine The less you become For I will prevail You're dead inside Inside your own hell It must be funny to hurt those you hold dear But I'...
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Without love and pain I am a hollow husk No more running if I see only walls A stone is cracked and I can bleed Do you rush the same color as me Look me in the eye Love me without restraint Look me in the eye Now it's time for my heart to break A reflection Inhuman I want to be alright Why do I Feel lonely Until the day I die Hope can spring through deserted hollows No longer speaking and it shows I spoke to the darkness The light only found me The only way out Don't look behind me Wander the...
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A photograph kept to our side Of other states and men gone by Walk the plains and fields of cows Wondering who will save us now There is alot to be afraid of Many things can be explained There is alot to be ashamed of Forget it anyway Sunny road that brightens the darkest Island ready for a bitter harvest Somber faces all for number one Straining to cling to delusion There is alot to be afraid of Many things can be explained There is alot to be ashamed of Remember it's o.k. Pointing the finge...
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Of skin and splinters We welcome come hither Those who are horrid Ignorance and intolerance We stand to the waves Sit and pray That all can be noticed That all are one We unite as a force A force to be reckoned Of serpentine Cool life stream We energize infinity Routes can open Broken locks Even nobility We stand to the waves As pyramids and slaves Only the eye Can show you the way Stand as one Let us pray
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Whatever makes you down I'll come round Kiss your cheeks Don't cry for me Cry for what we had It ain't so bad It ain't so bad Floating magnolia My inner being Let's get married Was so promising Floating magnolia My inner being Let's make love While remembering Why so down I'll pick you up Back into the sky Where you belong Sparkle brighter Setting you free Go to another What good memories Floating magnolia My inner being Let's get married Was so promising Floating magnolia My inner being One ...
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I sure do like reading these poems people put on the website. I like this one but the only problem is that there is a couple of grammatical errors. But that's not a big problem. Also, the dialogue in the story is good in short verses but near the end it starts going in every direction. Nice work.
Gah. I've already read one and fell in love with it. I guess you keep turning out good poetry. Keep up the good work.
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I saw your comment on my homepage for my poetry. Thank you so much. This is truly hilarious. I don't know if it was blatantly made to be that way, but the sarcasm made my lower gut burn with laughter.
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