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AGE: 24
LOC: Midvale, UT
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 20

I’m a novice writer and a dilettante.  I hope to use this tool called Urbis to maximize any potential I may have in the arena of creative writing, and help others do the same.

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Quotes / Faith
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9 Reviews   9 Comments
Faith is the ever-expanding black hole into which countless human minds, souls, dreams and potentialities are cast and utterly consumed.
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Quotes / True Love
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31 Reviews   29 Comments
Should sufficient quantities of the relevant neurochemicals be present after the biological processes governing lust and attraction fade, you have found true love.
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Things that are pissing me off about Urbis
I don't think your frustration is without merit. I am inclined to think that the flaw with Urbis is incentives and an objective standard for success in the review process. The first problem I see is that many of Urbis' participants are novices with little to say creatively or critically. In many avenues I am one such novice, as I am new to purely fictional works such as stories, in that, I'm still working on my own ability to critique fictional works that I read in such a way that is useful t...
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Quotes / Peace
This is a great quote. I once read a quote, though the author's name escapes me, that goes something like, "Civilization is the process through which men are freed from other men." Certainly your peace is a part of true civilization. I can appreciate a like-minded sentiment about the unnecessary drama and foolishness that often results from our myriad human interactions. I like that you have said in 5 words what it takes me 3 paragraphs to praise. I would not change this quote. kudos. Hopeful...
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