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AGE: 35
LOC: Bellingham, WA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: May 24

there’s a lot stuff jumbled in this head of mine and i am ecstatic that i found this outlet that really gives feedback—good, bad or otherwise. i am ready for it in waves—so fire away hit or miss i’m up for the challenge

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Haiku/Senryu / i want to be sedated
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muse me sedated warmth come over me at will flooding without waste
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So, what’s in a name? I guess that all depends. Baby books abound with endless histories as to the meaning of this name or that name or a variation thereof. However, there are no books as to where nicknames come from. But there are almost, well I’d pretty much say always, stories behind them- be it short and sweet, long and arduous, or just plain hilarious. So, here goes the history behind my nickname, because it won’t be found in a book, at least not yet. So, here goes. NPR. That is my nickn...
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So, what’s in a name? I guess that all depends. Baby books abound with endless histories as to the meaning of this name or that name or a variation thereof. However, there are no books as to where nicknames come from. But there are almost, well I’d pretty much say always, stories behind them- be it short and sweet, long and arduous, or just plain hilarious. So, here goes the history behind my nickname, because it won’t be found in a book, at least not yet. So, here goes. NPR. That is my nickn...
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So, what’s in a name? I guess that all depends. Baby books abound with endless histories as to the meaning of this name or that name or a variation thereof. However, there are no books as to where nicknames come from. But there are almost, well I’d pretty much say always, stories behind them- be it short and sweet, long and arduous, or just plain hilarious. So, here goes the history behind my nickname, because it won’t be found in a book, at least not yet. So, here goes. NPR. That is my nickn...
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was watching the show the other-- hilarious and love that show anyway. larry david gets into a fight with a woman at a movie theatre and she acuses him of looking at her breasts and his response is "yeah, you're wearing that dress because you want people to look at your shoes." just loved it. enjoy
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / GOD
man, this would be perfect for satire. so, i did the first five, but i don't have to flush right now. so what to do; what to do??? i'm not an athiest, but i don't really believe in god either-- so now what? but really, this was hilarious and a great twist on the musings of our "creator". and what a great point about all the stars and far off places we'll never get to. but maybe he just made them to look at with a very high powered telescope or the hubble. the world may never know.
Flash Fiction / In the dark
wow-- fairly powerful piece to put in so few words. it sounds like the start of a great book or even a screen play. and i can't decide who the drinker is. i could imagine a stodgy old man or a middle aged mid life crisis or even younger and brooding. the cat, the poor cat. but really, who goes around biting people :)
Flash Fiction / Little Things.
it's cute-- and i hate monopoly. so, that you could enjoy something like that is amazing. but really, it is the smallness of things. especially when done together. flashy- no not really, and i wonder if it's fiction? it's definitely worth expanding on. and it's sweet :)
Flash Fiction / A Fine Friendship
this seems like a great start to something that could be very engrossing. i already want to know what's going on with the characters and i already have a sense and feeling for her. nicely done. i can't wait to see more done with it.
Flash Fiction / Laura Tab, Tab for Short
It's a great little piece. bringing things together in such a small amount of words is difficult, but you've done a good job. however, the only real criticism i would offer-- if you're going for the nanofiction thing-- is the surprise or twist at the end. other than that-- kudos.
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