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AGE: 32
LOC: Omaha, NE
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 16

i am just a man in search of a story…

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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / sin...
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Its very essence even seems to slither out when one says it aloud. It is such a perfect word for such a beautiful vice. So few words actually bring with them such perfectly defining emotions, which I think is where these words get so much of their power. It is amazing how much power that one little word truly has. I find myself now with a married woman. It only began as a casual reintroduction for we had known each other well a few years before when I was living just north of the city. She w...
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Lyrics / Wyandotte...
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A black stained tear rolls off her cheek She dreams about the day When she will have the strength To hold her head up high Is it not worth it? Lives a life of shattered dreams and broken hope Yet she stays strong. But for how long? "For how long will I be the one?" she says. Then closes her eyes and lies And with a rage of frustration she cries "When do I get mine?" Downriver She stares up at the sky Arms stretched out wide Dreaming of a better life She wishes she could fly Down inside Forge...
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Poetry / hope
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Part I I am a dying light I wonder how long ill shine on in the distance I hear nothing but such thunderous silence I see nothing beyond a void that eats at my gaze I want ever so to fill that void... but... I am a dying light I pretend not to notice, for I feel thus i must exist, right? I touch deep into my own heart, but I worry so... why this heart still beats. I cry as it slows within my grasp and i am reminded that... I am a dying light I understand my role, my place, my fate. I say tak...
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Basically this is a rant with no structure to even come close to calling it poetry. I respect your right to speak your mind so i will not comment on the content so much as the fact that it has nothing in terms of poetic devices. Certainly you can be experimental with poetry but try not to mesh experimental style with controversial content or most people will see only a rant, not a poem.
beautiful! though it feels like it jumps in and out the dark brooding poet and into a girl's blog... words like "beasties" and "kitties" just don't seem to mesh with "expressive cadence and the flesh-eating butterflies of flowery verse."
Short Story / cets part one (of many!)
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Non-fiction / Snags
This is by far the most entertained and attentive that I believe that I have ever been to a description of a manicure! Masterfully written with the right balance of the complex among the simple. A great read.
Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / The Twelve Bloody Days of Christmas- Chapter 6
I cannot honestly find anything to critique... I love the chemistry between the detectives (kind of remind me of Brad Pitt and Morgan Freeman in Se7en). You have set up some interesting clues and avoided crime cliche's. I am certainly going to look for more... and purchase once you get it published! :)
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