Your strongest stanza is the second one. It is wonderfully written (sexual but not overt, i.e. "parting your tent flaps" is pretty explicit but the early reference to the Indian makes these image really work." I might work on the other stanzas to make the imagery a little more subtle so that it packs a bunch like the 2nd stanza. I like use of specific images that allude to the midwestern setting, i.e. walleyes, blueberries, blackberries. Lines 16-17 are a perfect example of what I mentioned e...

Amen. Would make a good first sentence to a story (or good first line for a script). Not sure if it holds up by itself, telling a story.

This is how I felt when I was "bumming" around Europe. I think that this sums up the how a writer lives his/her life.

No doubt this is true; it sounds a little like a chapter title in a self-help book.

This is creative and funny. It's believable and could very well some up the plight of someone's life. So far, this is the best 6-word memoir I have read in the bunch. Good luck.

This definitely shows a change in cahracter

Wow, I must commend you: you said a lot in only six words. It's a bit vague, but, at the same time, it leaves room for the reader to interpret however he/she wishes.

I'm not sure that you need to end the poem with "Depression is knocking at the door." It is evident from the poem that the narrator is talking about depression (or possibly addiction). I think the poem would be stronger if it ended with "...too late."