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AGE:
21
LOC: Oak Ridge, NJ
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 17
LOC: Oak Ridge, NJ
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 17
My name is Teresa i’m 20 years old i live in N.J.
I write poetry mainly and lyrics, I may want to attempt short stories in the future but we’ll see. Some of my influences and inspirations are:
Sylvia Plath
E.E. cummings
Elizabeth Wurtzle
Ani Difranco
Shakespeare
T.s. Eliot
Adrienne Rich
Langston Hueghs
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We whispered through our tin cans agreeing to meet at the corner of scared and anxious street. I was traveling filled with bitter blood, being rotten. Knowing full well what would go down that weekend in the inner city, her city of subway hands and pick pockets who were noticing my way back home, country habits. I wasn't from around that area, i walked like fire was licking the back of my heels. When i met up with her i studied her face, and took mental pictures trying to guess how she might ...
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My essence inside was outly turned with every inch of my self implored. To sink my fingers in like sand near the rosebud corners Of her door , where new lives open Innocent and pure knowing neither boy nor girl. I held my breath so as not to expel what shaken words from hearts would tell. She is all beauty and exquisite and attracts me like a bee to fragrant petals, that I rush to buzz and visit. How she makes the noise of angels that vibrate through my ear, the way you may hear the ocean Ins...
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There are no accidents in sunsets the colors are what they're supposed to be I'm sitting here waiting for words to shoot up at me, with my laptop and my coffee. I only feel like I should be somewhere when theres no place for me to be, but during my headdreams, and idleness I fight shy of anything that needs altering. Until time creeps up on my days like subtle lightening, scareing me shit less, making me crumple all my papers with last second screams that bellow "This is crap and I can't wri...
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Perhaps I'm trying too hard perhaps i shouldn't think at all. Perhaps the spaces where i change are more like chambers and not a cages where swinging me sits behind locked doors with a nagging annoyance like a cavity in my jaw. Because all of me just waits to be open to get words out again something written and lesser spoken. It's true sometimes i am diverted I do I get discouraged. Hearing other birds, words singing, humming hitting higher notes claiming much better than what i last wrote, b...
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Progress what is it? when your looking out the window a little girl bunkered down in Apt number one feeling not far from cozy common streets so simple. But you get tired like everyone else and you start fingering at the wrinkles. You start to look at your apartment door and wonder if it's ajar for you ? Like something old is dying dying and something new is dialing dialing trying to make a phone call to you. Trying to say " i have something new" But what would the ringing really do ? There is...
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Well, I think i connected with this one i mean i got all the feelings and emotions you were trying to detail so in that aspect it's well written, however i feel as though somethings missing, like what is it about this women ? Why is she the subject of the poem there is more that can be said.
I like this one it was nice and it gave me good feelings,"Dart frogs and I had a cup of tea" i really like this line because i can picture it, plus who wouldn't want to have tea with a couple of dart frogs? The nice little things in the poem like that did it for me, the only thing i can say thats slightly negative about this poem is that towards the end it gets slightly confusing,the last four lines really threw me. I think you can make it better and then it would totally enhance the poem tim...
I didn't get any feeling out of it, it felt like you were using all these intense words to hide behind something you feel that might be so much easier simply said."Her love is undeniable, unsoiled, virginal, and true". I like this this part alot it tells me something, shows me as the reader exactly what her love is, I like it it's good description.
Ok for starters this poem is sweet a little tooo sweet for my liking but one thing that i did find extreamly charming about this poem wat the last line "thats why i go" I think it was nice, the reader got to get alittle bit into your "feeling", it made you appear a bit vulnerable and thats what we like. The only thing that dissapoints me is that your not getting outside of that box, your being to safe with your poetry, your keeping the rhymes simple, just go crazy with it, who knows what you ...
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