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AGE:
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LOC: Ridgewood, NY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 16
LOC: Ridgewood, NY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 16
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We finally sat down and had a long interaction it lasted approximately 1 hour and 56 months taking place over the course of two lifetimes the chair i sat in was oak and as it creeked i stared at his white hair and his long nails we looked at the clouds together and blinked then i wondered then i asked him why do the clouds move in that direction? he said in actuality its not the clouds that move its us and the earth moving along the clouds standing there watching us pass by
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I looked at the sky filed with light and I watched the birds dance kissing sunbeams partnering with each other flapping laughing and all this with no pants I looked to the sky staring at the gay seagulls glaring with amazement observing their freedom as they danced in the sun's light smiling happily hugging piety and all this all this all this with no pants
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noble wift at the time of my arrival I had arms shorter than my intentions legs shorter than my stature respect not valued in the marketplace and hair shorter than my flowing spirit so I went to a land that valued my intent to men who would marvel at my stature tell me great things while giving my weary backpack a soft seat cushion giving visitors the impression they had comfort to spare far my stout legs did carry never once an inch of growth did I see this journey did lie to me providence I...
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The Sky is Falling listen. hear. don't stall. it's coming, it's coming ya'll babylon Babylon will fall the sky is falling but society is still yawning a waking dream shivering ciudad covers pulled back the morning comes opening the door expecting a world long forgotten
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Love everybody Love everything revise repeat redraft respect all life especially your own because out of that the world will follow
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Cool review. I like the attempt to build suspense towards the end. it kept me looking for meaning. Thank you for expressing yourself!
Wow I really liked that it was like therapy or something. It brought me to this like peaceful place where all was well and full of hope. Thank you so much for writing that. Keep it up!
I love the lush imagery. I also like your relationship with the english language. From reading it I can tell that you admire it's smooth characters, it's gentle skin, and enjoy sitting down with it for an intimate conversation. When reading your poem I feel as though I can jump right into the world you created. Thanks
Very well done. I really appreciated the structure of the poem. The repetition really anchored it for me and the subject of the poem was something that I feel alot of people could relate to. I think some artists often get lost in their own world and forget to effectively convey a message. Very well done indeed.
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