nelson1's profile

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AGE: 39
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 24

Hello! to all you fellow writers,poets and critics.

My name is Maria.I am aged 38

I live in Newcastle-upon-Tyne in England,I guess that makes me a Geordie.

I,ve been writing on and off for about 13 years. I would say my style is to have no style in particular; as I write whatever I feel; whenever I feel it, I guess you could say I,m a free spirit.

I don,t really consider myself as educated in English literature,though I have done some creative writing courses. My work isn’t based on education it is based on my life experiences, observations and emotions.

I also like a good debate.
I do like good advice re- writing skills as I enjoy learning as I go. I dislike having books rammed down my throat or pompous elitist arrogan…

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Item Stats
Reviewer Stats
Items
Short Story / The Singer
Version 1
56 Reviews   43 Comments
I bare my soul in harmony.
Opportunities
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Cats
Version 6
32 Reviews   14 Comments
Cats are very clever creatures. I have an outdoor cat I call Speckles, although he is all black. Other times I call him my little black panther as he is lean, sleek and muscular. He always looks after his coat. He can be both cute and vicious. In the morning when he wants his early meal, he snuggles in for an hour or two then purrs and rubs his nose in my face until I give up and get out of bed to feed him. If I'm really tired I go back to bed, I think he hopes I'll forget I fed him so tries ...
Reviews
I quite like this, not sure of genre, could be country or rap. Gets your point accross to the young, re drugs and the fact he doesnt care, not sure I like the use of live large, I feel this effects the flow, but know why its there. It just says what it means really, could be deeper, and I think drugs effect the rich as much as the poor and the sick.
50.0% Review Quality (2 Votes)
Removed
Criticism / 6 Words
I loved this one, I know exactly how you feel, i'm the same about singing, not only are we poor financially, but people get jealous too.
Quotes / Dreamers
True, in a way, sometimes people dream of being like us, or they may dream of us if they know us.
Poetry / On Top
The lines I cum first as do you don't really make sense. as if you cum first then he couldn't of. or you both must of cum at the same time. I think puctuation would of benifited it(not for reading, as it was easy to read as written, but for to emphasise expression). I like that this is a woman author too expressing how sex makes her feel. Having said that it is a bit raunchy for my taste, but is good writing IMO. Honeyed lips is a bit cliche, but loved Raking nails, I like hairy chests too :)