What a wild and bumpy written ride! This particular part is so true; I know quite a few 'Nightmare Steeds!' "He is the minds Of thousands of humans Untamable and free He is the spirit within us He is the Nightmare Steed. Great Write!

Hello... this piece reminds me that although I am keeper of much... happiness must be earned and the lot, not taken for granted. Very though provoking.

WOW... I LOVE IT'S DEEPNESS... HIGHLIGHTED BY YET, IT'S SIMPLICITY. IT TAKES YOU THERE. RIGHT THERE... IN THE MIDDLE OF THIS THICK AND DELICIOUS PORTRAIT OF WRITTEN DESIRE. A GREAT WRITE. I APPLAUD YOU. NATUREBOOY52

WOW... WHAT AN UN-EARTHY RIDE FROM ONE SIDE OF THE SPECTRUM TO THE OTHER. THE FIRST THREE LINES HAD ME CHUCKLING QUITE A BIT. WANTED TO STAY THERE FOR A WHILE, BUT SO INTERESTED, AND DARED NOT MISS A BEAT OF THIS CRAZY RIDE! VERY WELL WRITTEN... PROVOKING THOUGHT ALL THE WAY DOWN... 'AND BACK UP TOO!' THANKS FOR THE RIDE. NATUREBOOY52

VERY WELL WRITTEN.... I HAVE BEEN THERE SO MANY TIMES IT SEEMED AS IF YOU WERE DRAGGING ME ALONG WITH YOU FOR THE RIDE. THE PAIN OF LONELINESS HAUNTING ONE, TIME AND TIME AGAIN... TOO MANY THOUGHT... TOO MUCH TIME. WOW! YOU HAVE EXPRESSED IT VERY WELL. I APPLAUD YOU MY FRIEND. KEEP IT UP!! NATUREBOOY52