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AGE: 30
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 13

A spark ignited, a yearn to see.
The flame grows tall.. Tell me, is it within me?
I write these words to express my thoughts. I see, I feel, I wonder…. will I be sought. Written are the words that subside my fears. What shall I say to influence the tears? What words will I receive, from that of my new found peers?

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Poetry / unraveld
Version 3
5 Reviews   0 Comments
You are like my world, many layers within. Tears flow when you open up...mouths water with your taste. Unraveled, intricate... Unattractive exteriors...smooth, soft layers within. You are fragile, sensitive, sweet...you are strong, forceful, deep. If I cut you, will you bleed? If you open up, sight will be unseen. People cry for you... irresistible. Does it hurt to be so good? Do you hurt to be so bad? Like a book, you cannot be judged. You show many colors. True they must be. Ultimately, you...
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Poetry / intrigue
Version 2
9 Reviews   0 Comments
intrigued, one wonders... thinking, seeking the truth. my hand quivers as it embraces, igniting the passion of one..combined, the wonder of two. my stance, tall and firm...my glance, deep, pounding. embraced, innertwined...head to toe...hands, reaching to the soul. stance is ready, feet running..ready to pounce... still yearning for more.
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Poetry / Where...
Version 2
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you are not lost, yet.. you wish to be found. barriers built....dense, tall, strong. emotions felt....soft, long, sound. are you safe.. are you compromised? you cannot be seen, all eyes on you. is this you...can you see? arms are crossed, the mind is at work. the barrier stands tall...who do you protect? broken pieces...can you get out? lift, mend, be free. troubles are true, destiny is yours. the road traveled is long, cold, harsh. the journey commences......
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Poetry / I
Version 1
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I wish, I want, I will, to see... I feel, I desire, I yearn, to be... I choose, I do, I will become... Where do I look? How do I know? What do I do? To know, I am true... Must I struggle... Can it be with ease... Knowledge, Peace, Serenity.......follow me, PLEASE. Mr. "O"
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over all i thought is was somewhat funny...dont think i would care for it in a book, though
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