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AGE:
41
LOC: Warner, OK
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 16
LOC: Warner, OK
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 16
I’m 40 years old I have 3 children and 2 grandchildren. I have always liked to write and have a very active imagination
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When you born the angels wept They knew your soul couldn’t be kept They kissed your brow and sent you on your way To be with us this Christmas day The heavens did open and let it pour To welcome you to earths front door The stars did shine so big and bright To help you see all through the night The day you were born I wept for joy For there had never been a lovelier boy Your face was perfect and sweet as could be I knew that you were meant for me.
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I am your defender wheather by choice or not I've walked the walls in cold and hot I've been to all sorts of foreign places Never seeing any familier or friendly faces On land sea or in the air I have always tried to remain fair I am your defender I walk through the night to always make sure wrongs get made right My lifes blood I did freely spill so all your dreams could be fulfilled I never asked for anything not medals,watches or gold rings The only thing I thought I'd earned Was your respe...
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I thought it was very entetaining, but I thought the word he was over used.
I liked it for what it was a eulogy. Maybe you could have put a little bit more emotion into it but all in all I got a very nice picture of the man you were saying goodbye to.
I loved it you can feel how much he means to you check out your punctuation. Very lovely poem
It painted a pretty descriptive image. The flow is off I think choosing some differant words or differant spacing would benifit this piece.The one line I really had trouble with was his strong but not obsessed over body. I really didn't get what this line was for
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