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AGE:
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LOC: Tualatin, OR
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 02
LOC: Tualatin, OR
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 02
Who of you
Are among the mighty few
Who would help this world
Block the path in which it was hurled?
I am here to say
That we’re all here to stay
Because through poetry
We can set our souls free
I, JJ, often referred to as “The Nameless Who,” (though obviously I am not so nameless, as I have given you a name by which to call me) am but a young soul in this world of ghosts. There are many bodies inhabiting this planet, but there are very few who actually are here, in soul, heart, and mind. The rest, the mass and grand amount, are here but to exist, and are useless in a sense. I am here to say that I am indeed here, a soul with the intention to rise above the conflicts that are forever present in our lives, and be part of …
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I know you think you control your fate You don't, it's in my hands When I decide your time is done Your reign on earth will end You've pushed my buttons and pulled my strings But your puppet I am not And everyone who knows you bitch Will know you deserved just what you got And when I stand before the judge And he asks me for my plea With a giant smile on my face I'll plee insanity
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Grand Illision Strange sounds, strange sights Eyes can’t focus Psychadelic rainbow lights Had a few hits Has your mind all scared What happens next Brace yourself, be prepared The sound sinks deep As the music plays Like a broken heart On a rainy day Fingers snap Guitar strums Drummer screws up Too cumbersome So many movin’ bodies Everybody feel the groove The sound finds your soul Your body starts to move Your ...
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Letters wriggle and dance as they leave the tip of the pencil Disassembling in a blatant disobedience of their Creator's dictation These wayward renegades form alliances different than the incipient Rearranging into unforseen groupings intent on a new purpose They accuse The Writer of crimes not understandable, illogical Rampant, they become, insistant on bringing closure To a vendetta that is not understood but somehow undeniabley reasonable Lies! Lies! Lies! they silently chant with seethi...
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Invisible What is it's meaning? It is a concept Not a thing of reality A word, referring to a feeling I am real But how do I know? The cuts on my arms and legs, my collar bone They tell me I can feel The stains on my knife, the wall They leave a record of my existance But when I pass before others sight They dismiss me just as their minds recognize me As an object taking up space I am an obstruction they must agitatedly avoid As they travel hurriedly onward down the road I am stranded on a hi...
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High off my emotion Feeling be my drug Don't make me go slow motion I'd sooner have them pull the plug Don't think a single instance I'll wait for any reason Can't you see me in the distance? Slowing down would be a treason Can't seem to quench this need To be where everything goes down To seek out a social guarantee That I'll be rewarded common ground I won't let myself be left out I've been there many times before I'd suffer torture, sickness, drought To avoid being booted out the door Wit...
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It was a great idea to bring a new perspective to the old Cain and Abel story! I've never thought of the old bible story with that kind of perspective, and now I don't think I'll be able to think of Genesis again without considering the point of view you've put in my head. I applaud you.
The very layout of this poem isn't very good, and ghere are grammatical and spelling errors. You put the lines in sentences, which makes the short lines bad sentences. My opinion, although the feeling of the poem and the descrpitiveness is okay, you really need to work on this.
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