I dont understand the impetus behind this story. Ann Rice comes to mind, but is it an allegory? I found myself wanting the story to be over as none of my questions were answered as I read onward - why was the man in this cabin, why had so many years transpired and yet he remained with only a dog as a companion. I feel like I found a few pages to a book, and maybe that is the author's intention? I liked the story and found myself wanting more at the end - the end represented the good part to m...

Cute, done many times - unrequited love - would have liked to see a twist somewhere.

Overdone subject- nothing new - committing suicide is a sin - doesnt make too much sense to me.

Will you is a great title and the first line made me read this until the end. The last stanza could be stronger, but overall emotional, expressive and a nice read.

The quotes origins are great. I read the quote and thought AND? It needs more to make itself memorable.

I loved this. I loved that you never said the name that makes you breathless and instead made this a suit of armor for all of us to wear. It did feel like you had written it so I might use it. But I have lived it. Using senses such as taste and breathe were a great tool and very profound. I plan to look for more of your work. Very very touching. Very moving...this work left me wanting more.