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AGE:
16
LOC: Fort Collins, CO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 01
LOC: Fort Collins, CO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 01
okay, muca is pronounced (moo-kah)
just to get that out of the way ;P
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4 Test Drive Finders were leaving the clearing. It was night with a full moon as our spotlight. Tonight was the last night of the month, the night us Finders continue our travels. Some of us left in smalls groups of twos or threes, others left alone. Children of ten years were hugged and kissed and left alone; it was their time to find their own path in the mountains. The clearing was emptied of tents and fire places; once all the Finders were gone it would be like we were never there. The br...
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3 Watching the Rose Opening my eyes, and fighting a major headache, I tried to gather my thoughts. Where the hell was I? Sitting up, I gazed around the room, for it was a room. I was in a tent, black, and on a mattress bed covered with a white quilt. A quilt? In this weather? Then Savio walked in holding a cup of water and everything came back. I remembered our conversation and my choice of accepting Father Echo’s gift. I lifted my shirt; I had placed my hand on my stomach before I blacked ou...
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3 Watching the Rose Opening my eyes, and fighting a major headache, I tried to gather my thoughts. Where the hell was I? Sitting up, I gazed around the room, for it was a room. I was in a tent, black, and on a mattress bed covered with a white quilt. A quilt? In this weather? Then Savio walked in holding a cup of water and everything came back. I remembered our conversation and my choice of accepting Father Echo’s gift. I lifted my shirt; I had placed my hand on my stomach before I blacked ou...
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3 Watching the Rose Opening my eyes, and fighting a major headache, I tried to gather my thoughts. Where the hell was I? Sitting up, I gazed around the room, for it was a room. I was in a tent, black, and on a mattress bed covered with a white quilt. A quilt? In this weather? Then Savio walked in holding a cup of water and everything came back. I remembered our conversation and my choice of accepting Father Echo’s gift. I lifted my shirt; I had placed my hand on my stomach before I blacked ou...
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4 Test Drive Finders were leaving the clearing. It was night with a full moon as our spotlight. Tonight was the last night of the month, the night us Finders continue our travels. Some of us left in smalls groups of threes or twos, others left alone. Children of ten years were hugged and kissed and left alone; it was their time to find their own path in the mountains. The clearing was emptied of tents and fire places; once all the Finders were gone it would be like we were never there. The br...
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very nice! its a story that i cant wait to read! your descriptions are very good, not too much and too little. your so-far plot is intoxicating! keep it up! i cant wait to read more!
sounds like a great story youve got going on here. you've got the plot all set up and the charecters all played out. good luck with it!
i love how you never say who, or what, 'he' is; you keep us guessing! i dont know who to help you on the 4th stanza but, with writing talent such as yours, you'll definitaly find something to fit your story and ease your mind! keep the good work coming!
few words are good, but there are exceptions. what are you trying to do here?
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