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AGE:
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LOC: West Palm Beach, FL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 18
LOC: West Palm Beach, FL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 18
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Lived a lot, laughed a lot, cried a lot.
Like hard music. I read paranormal romance.
Write a book that has gotten rave reviews from friends, but now i don’t know what to do with it!
Love the outdoors, working out, being healthy.
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“Good,” Doe said, “because ta change ye, I have ta drain yehr blood ta the point of death, and then, I will need ta feed ye mine. The Mother One gifted me with sharp teeth,” He said, showing them his incisors, “ta make this easier.” The three men stared at him in shock, their faces paling. Tas spoke first. “Um…let’s return ta the castle first.” He suggested, as the others nodded in agreement. “After the celebrations, we’...
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“Good,” Doe said, “because ta change ye, I have ta drain yehr blood ta the point of death, and then, I will need ta feed ye mine. The Mother One gifted me with sharp teeth,” He said, showing them his incisors, “ta make this easier.” The three men stared at him in shock, their faces paling. Tas spoke first. “Um…let’s return ta the castle first.” He suggested, as the others nodded in agreement. “After the celebrations, we’...
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Prologue (part 1) Birth of the Naith Warriors Summer 1021, Eile, Ireland Taskill Geir pushed his way through the battlefield using his towering height and broad shoulders to part the horde before him. Cutting and slicing with his great broadsword, Claiomh as na Dicheanntar, Blade of the Beheader, he left a trail of bodies behind as he advanced ever forward after his brother-in-arms, Donnan (Doenann) Clynne. The two had fought side by side for years, and it was the first t...
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Prologue (part 1) Birth of the Naith Warriors Summer 1021, Eile, Ireland Taskill Geir pushed his way through the battlefield using his towering height and broad shoulders to part the horde before him. Cutting and slicing with his great broadsword, Claiomh as na Dicheanntar, Blade of the Beheader, he left a trail of bodies behind as he advanced ever forward after his brother-in-arms, Donnan Clynne. The two had fought side by side for years, and it was the first time Tas co...
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Prologue Birth of the Naith Warriors Summer 1021, Eile, Ireland Taskill Geir pushed his way through an army of bodies using his towering height and broad shoulders to part the horde before him. Cutting and slicing with his great broadsword, Claiomh as na Dicheanntar, Blade of the Beheader, he left a trail of bodies behind as he advanced ever forward after his brother-in-arms, Donnan Clynne. The two had fought side by side for years in this war, and it was the first time Ta...
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very good! wanted to read it cuz my own prologue is very long so wanted to read another long one. (it wasn't really long) liked how it started out with action and kept me intrigued. liked description about the hair like dried blood. at first thought person under desk was woman, maybe make that clear from start? suggestions: 'i kept silent, not wanting him to know i was there' or 'i kept silent, hoping he'd disappear.' '"...tapes?" He demanded. When he looked back to stare directly into my eye...
An excellent story. I critiqued one of your earlier chapters and was happy to see this story once more. this this chapter was interesting than earlier one. Other was about a fight. the story line is creative and pulls a person in. Characters are intriguing. Complaints: sentence structuring is often awkward and in u have quote marks in wrong places twice i wondered if the training room was really a secure place to have a secret conversation, tho i know u said he locked it. pg 6 - 'hearing what...
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