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AGE: 22
LOC: Ashland, OR
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 15

I am a girl, who should have been born a tiger, but oh well… I also was given a huge imagination, but poor story telling skills. This is an issue, seeing as how those things in my imagination are starting to become too much for my little mind to handle. So, I have come here to write down some things and develop an ability to share my ideas…even if it is only a limited ability.

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Horror / The Call
Version 1
15 Reviews   15 Comments
 The man stopped. He was close to the place that I had told him to find, but he was a dumb man. What could I expect? I think he knows that he is dumb. He must. It won’t take much to convince him that he is great. I had followed him here. I knew what I was working with, but I wanted to see for sure. He would work. Anyone that stupid would work. He looked around. Suspicious? Maybe he could feel me watching him. Maybe he knew I was here. Maybe he was just a self-conscious human. He kn...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Wings On Fire CH01: V
Version 2
16 Reviews   16 Comments
Wings On Fire Ch. 01 Six. I had counted and trust me that was not an easy thing to do. It’s hard to concentrate while your car is rolling over, but I kept track of the sky as the world hurtled past my crushed windshield. I should have known what was going on, I very rarely just black out and wake up to find myself in the middle of wrecking my truck. Whenever he wants me he always uses a calling card, too much of a coward to just come out and say it I guess. Where was the rest of it thou...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Wings On Fire CH01: V
Version 1
8 Reviews   8 Comments
 Six, I had counted, of course six. I should have known that, whenever he wanted me to know something he always used a calling card, too much of a coward to just come out and say it. Where was the rest of it though? Had he become so sure of himself that he could now refer to himself with only one, he no longer needed the full 666 to make his point clear. Well if he wants to talk, we can talk I thought as I pulled my arms out from between my steering wheel and the crushed dashboard. I nee...
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Short Story / With Himself at War
by stickvaughn
I thought that this was incredible. I'm sorry that I can not offer any criticisms, but if I did they would just be things I made up. I have never in my wildest dreams thought about anything like this, and I think it is amazing that you did. Not to mention how you wove the tale, I was not once pulled out of the story. You described everything so vividly that I was actually hoping there would be more, and I was so sad for the bed when it didn't get to go live with Mr. Hatch. I even wanted to co...
Romance / Bloody Petals
by Giggles
This is fantastic. I love your protagonist, she is witty and real, and I laughed out loud more than once at things she said. Also, your second chapter makes much more sense with this as background...it makes Camon and Bella's relationship seem much less important since I would expect there to be some sort of romance between Elaine and Camon (after reading chapter 2). I love that she has her own special powers but she is by no means invincible. It makes her that much more believable. The only ...
Sci Fi & Fantasy / King and Country- Tempest
by TheNorseRaven
I think this is incredible. You have created a world that is completely different, but has enough similarities to ours that I can follow along without feeling lost while still immersing myself completely into this alternate reality. Dorian, in my opinion, is a very strong character. You tell us a lot about him without really saying anything direct which is very hard to do. I like him already and all I know about him is that he was suspicious of Lock and Crooked's behavior before all this, and...
Romance / Bloody Petals Ch 2
by Giggles
I think that this is an interesting take on vampire lore. I haven't read the first chapter but I assume that provides more information about whatever accident has left Isabelle in Camon's care. I like how your vampires take other people's identities when they die to keep living within the mainstream. It is an interesting concept that I personally have never seen before. Your dialog is interesting, and appropriate, but I would look at making the speakers sound different. By developing the char...
Flash Fiction / Jamison's Clarity
by Anonymous
I think it is impressive that in a piece so short you have managed to contain so much information and description. I love the way you describe the world around Jamison. It is a little disjointed and confusing at parts, but I feel like that adds to the environment you have created for Jamison. He is a confused man who cant remember who he is, so it makes sense for his world view to be a little difficult to understand. The only thing that I had a hard time with is "clarity". The way you used it...
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