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AGE: 20
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 22

im a pretty cool guy. graduated high school this year yay! i uh-tribute my writing style to e. e. cummings and my freshman year english teacher, Mr. Cochran. without these two inspirations i would have never become the writer i am today. im bord so i figured id add some more crap to my profile. im kinda lazy and i love to write poetry. i like to read poetry but thats about it so that pretty much all i review. i love limericks but ive never been very good at writing them.

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Poetry / confrontation
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to night i heard a prayer something riddled with hidden meaning "i could ask you wouldnt tell (does it matter- no it dont) i could yell you wont speak Something open for discussion and discomfort seams so bleak that only nothing sounds so furiously to make a deaf man's mind bleed do not taste the fouler liquids the one you poison ever deep until your brain starts oozing liquids and your mind begins to seep our children see the difference and our parents see the truth but will you ever only s...
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simplicity in its finest manner purer than forever (i tried to tell you you didnt believe me) so what now?just lay there sitting in your coffin screaming "it doesnt fit" with your masterplan full in motion gears spinning out of sync and tears that flood the gaskets with an oily Substance you never wore keep sitting with your eyes closed staring into space talking about your sickness but your mouth- so disconnected from the real world- its like your telling the truth for the very first time so...
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Poetry / interrogation
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who did that mess two cars collide and no children of mankind seek to help the wounded or do they, like pawns ,just march forward seeking to be destroyed or just reformed into a new age warrior complete with all the basic neccesitees of un-uniformly coalitions of truth and justice for all under the hangmans flag ,turning blue from the suffocating freedom that was a lie this is the only constant variable
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Poetry / 4 more yrs..
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vote for me re-elect me king me give me a raise President disposition abolish aboloition demolish demolition my lies are magically delicious fly me to the moon our flag ill raise so soon in the best of '83 lets help elect governor Jerry Brown drop the bomb no more red scare
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Poetry / bass ackwards
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damn HE IS THERE no less ; no more whats one whore [no] was th-" "what as we speak reloading but im yeah baby" miss me "did you twice at her shot her good i got me past ran right ha dopes all running the look at see me they wont WAY [yeah] DOWN THAT coming] you guys heard that way when he went off [he (the time is now) im gone "get out" a problem you have what Buddy [hey] stupid Blondie know anything you dont shut up "calm down-" know the you dont even is it really can tell me how think you ...
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Poetry / Voyeurism
cool. i can relate cuz i hated working at my job and my boss drove me crazy. of course my white blood cells were always like "u suck at this job and were not helping you" so no suppport there. oh well. really liked the poem.
wicked funny. was laughing like the whole way through.kids are great and i thank my lucky stars my parents room was no where near mine when i was younger (or now days for that matter). really good thanks for the great read.
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pretty cool. liked it but im not quite sure i can completely agree. still, its not whether i agree or not that determines a great writer and ive only read two of your poems but both seem very good to me. i like the concepts behind them and what they stand for.
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most people will probably say that i rated you a bit high but i say patooey or however its spelled. really good poem and i can completely understand the "glamour" behind it.as for the rhyming, just remember that not all poetry rhymes or even has a definite rhythm, look at how famous walt whitman became. good poem, id like to read more.
Really good poem and anyone with any sort of fun childhood memory should be able to relate. Great imagery brought back my childhood and made me remember how things were pure and simple when i was a kid. Good poem and i hoppe your father is proud.
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