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AGE: 16
LOC: Cameron, MO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 18

hi. my name is allison. i am an anime fan and like to read mangas and fantasy books. i also enjoy reading historical fiction and some no-fiction as long as is something that deals with other cultures or the past. i draw when im not writing. i draw mostly anime/manga people and scenery. my freinds like to call me a redneck country girl. i love animals and learning about different things. my favorite animal is the horse in all its majestic glory. and remeber true greatness knows gentleness, and cleverness is better that strength.

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Poetry / Four Friends
Version 1
2 Reviews   1 Comment
Once long ago I had four friends One was born of Earth One was born of Air One was born of Fire One was born of Water The one born of Earth Had a long slender horn of Emerald on her head Vines growing up her legs to meet the leaves of her mane and tail Her hooves were made of ebony dark and shiny She herself was the color of the wild woods Her eyes were the same Emerald color of her horn She ran thought the woods And it seemed that she was flying through the trees The drumming of her hooves n...
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Young Adult / A Vampire's Story / Prologue & Chapter One
Version 1
25 Reviews   11 Comments
A VAMPIRE’S STORY Prologue: Alaina Hello everyone, my name is Alaina Blood Moon Walker. I was born on July 15, 1429. I haven’t totally forgotten how old I am, but know I am around 575 years old (give or take a few years). The reason why: at age eighteen I was taken away from my family, and bitten by a vampire after a forced marriage to him all in one day. His name is Antonio Blood Moon Vespers, king of the Blood Moon clan of vampires in Brussels, Belgium. My greatest time of all was when I ha...
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Novel Treatments / Warrior- Chapter One
Version 2
13 Reviews   1 Comment
The rain poured down on a small Eathain village. On the hill over-looking the village stood a young woman. Her long silver hair was pulled back into a tight ponytail, and the only loose strands stuck to her face. Her cold, icy blue eyes searched the surrounding area for any sign of danger. A small symbol on her forehead of three crescent moons intertwined glowed slightly as the moon appeared in a break in the clouds above, only to be swallowed as quickly as it appeared. Pulling her hood back...
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Poetry / Soldier
Version 1
4 Reviews   0 Comments
In the night I see A soldier waiting for me To go to his side And kiss him goodbye Before he leaves for war My heart is torn When I see him go For all I see is his bow Strung on his pack And a sword across his back As he leaves he says to me “I will come back just you wait and see” I wave my goodbye Before I run to cry My heart torn and tattered I feel he’ll come home battered Bloodier than the rest Could this his harshest test Or his bravest test I know he will not be caught at rest Into thi...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / The Darkness Of Dreams
by napalmwriter
Nice description, being a hunter myself, you really did a good job at describing the deer and the hunt. It made my think that I was really there, watching everything going on like you do in the movies. I really think you did a good job at placing the character, and the story in the right time frame. Great job!! :)
Novel Treatments / DA Drake Chp 1 Final
by alexianx
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Young Adult / Dead End.
by DajohE
nice poem. i think you placed this into the wrong review queue though. i liked how it rhymed and flowed, but you ending really doesn't go with the rest of the peice. other than that it was ok. keep writing and good luck. :)
Short Story / The City
by Marian
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Unknown
by galadriel
nice, but there are a few things you could work on like describe your character in the first sentence. just don't say she is a half-elf, but describe her features before hand a then state she is a half-elf. ie "a young woman stood under a old Rowan tree. her delicate features stood out greater than another human due to her elven heritage." it gives the reader more to go by and keeps their attention more than what is already stated in your first copy. you still get that the main character is a...
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