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AGE: 17
LOC: Cameron, MO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 26

hi. my name is allison. i am an anime fan and like to read mangas and fantasy books. i also enjoy reading historical fiction and some no-fiction as long as is something that deals with other cultures or the past. i draw when im not writing. i draw mostly anime/manga people and scenery. my freinds like to call me a redneck country girl. i love animals and learning about different things. my favorite animal is the horse in all its majestic glory. and remeber true greatness knows gentleness, and cleverness is better that strength.

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A VAMPIRE’S STORY Prologue: Alaina Hello everyone, my name is Alaina Blood Moon Walker. I was born on July 15, 1429. I haven’t totally forgotten how old I am, but know I am around 575 years old (give or take a few years). The reason why: at age eighteen I was taken away from my family, and bitten by a vampire after a forced marriage to him all in one day. His name is Antonio Blood Moon Vespers, king of the Blood Moon clan of vampires in Brussels, Belgium. My greatest time of all was when I ha...

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by cooljim102055

it put a smile on my face and i think it is just a little advice everyone could use.

by AllMyLoveC

I like you poems thought/subject but I didn’t like how it was structured. I can tell what you are trying to say, but everything seems just to run on into each other. You don’t have to limit your poem to just six lines. Personally I think it would be better if you broke the longer lines into smaller ones, but that is just me. Other than that I liked rest.

by tarleisio

There really isn't much I can say about your peice other than the fact that I liked it greatly. You established everything you needed and kept going with it. Your description was excellent, and it flowed together quite well also. I don't think there is much else to say about it, since it is just as good as anything that I have read about this certain time period. I also liked the slight humor you add along the way. It gives you story life to say.

by SkyeRayven

A myth can sometimes be hard to write if you don't have the imagination to back it up, but I think you did a good job with this. The myths shows some real originality, but there are a few things I think you could do to spruce it up. Your writing is choppy through out the entire peice. If you are using it for another story I think you could add more descriptions throught out. Right now you use the very basic stuff to describe what is going on. You would be able to mystify the reader if you out...

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