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LOC: Willits, CA
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LOC: Willits, CA
GEN: Female
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my life as a cloud airborn only fearful of towering mountains my life as a mountain earthborn olny fearful of relentless waves my life as a wave waterborn only fearful of thoughtless men my life as a man fireborn only fearful of air earth and water
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my life as a cloud airborn only fearful of towering mountains my life as a mountain earthborn olny fearful of relentless waves my life as a wave waterborn only fearful of thoughtless men my life as a man only fearful of air earth and water
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i have seen the fire of desire i have tasted the ice of revenge i have walked the dead man's road i held another's life in my hands would pray to God i could go back but i'm sure i'd do it again i'm sure my actions were all wronge when the system failed a righteous man i've walked accross this land from sea to shining sea i've seen the darkness i've seen the light paying it forward and might makes right poor feeding destitute the corruption of a child God's wonders i've seen the devil's hand ...
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the rain has stop but the trees are still crying red moon rising the lights are on in the house where i'm not welcome so i listen to the frogs sing you know what i mean it's a lonely night he's changed the lock on the door and i can't remember what i came here for so i'll walk away to look for a brighter day i'm not leavig love behind just some old lang zign gonna find me a new dream you know what i mean deafened by a fire roaring out of control i didn't hear the bell toll but fire and ice o...
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In a million years i've played the game many different ways down through the years i've won and lost, but willing to play again so place your bets and spin the wheel. we.re gonna play love again ^chorus^ I'm sorry madam you've lost your bet your lover loves another And you, too, sir have also lost your lady loves your brother but take another chance at love you know you want to spin again chorus well congradulations ma-am you're gonna be married soon and good luck to you sir you're gonna be ...
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this is wonderful. the reader wants desperately for the boys to be found, or maybe find their way to something better. yet when they are found the anxiety isn't lifted, just slightly less urgent. i only had a little difficulty with the vernacular, but not enough to stop reading. bravo.
this is just the chorus right? there's no meat here. keep going. it sound's like this man has a story to tell. please tell it.
the love for uncle Joe come through very clearly, eloquently, and touchingly. the rhyming in the middle of the line kind of interrupts the flow, but it feels more like fighting tears. beautiful work
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