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AGE: 54
LOC: Elgin, IL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 26

I have been writing for 40 years, basically for sanity’s sake. I have always dreamed of my fifteen minutes of fame.
I seem to have it now. Thanks!

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Quotes / Confusion
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One thought can makes a thousand tears and all I have is a face streaked with experience.
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Poetry / Hospice
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The best of my life is when days to hours are knocking on ones door. A sorrowful despair takes my soul soaring. A piece of their heart, bonds with mine. Whole- within a family's void, I can give the gift of peace- and comfort at it's highest calling. Though death is swift, renewal is constant.
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Non-fiction / Really, I'm Just Thinkin
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One day- I will walk away. This world too hard for me. Yet I will never forget those wanting to live- how I wish I felt that free. It's all what happens- in one's live- that really tells the tale- Now I know that I am tarnished- I live in my own jail. Too many faces, too many hands- since I have grown so old- there is nothing I don't remember- My story too deep to be told.
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Poetry / New Wave
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I wake- you are not here. Just the milky blue sea. I recall, it was the day before yesterday. Strip pool-my idea Slave time- yours. What genius we have together! Tunnels are everywhere. I will teach you the thrill of imagination, and you will teach me not to be shy. I will plant fields. Seeds of lilac and you will bring them to life.
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Poetry / Shattered
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Can love die so quickly, Like a radio clicked to off? It falls into tiny pieces of glass. It's change that makes our love difficult. It's you not satisfied with life, it's me not satisfied with you. How many times can we glue this shattered chaos, before it becomes too small to look for it with a magnifying glass?
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Haiku/Senryu / Unseen Love
When I first read this, it was as if I were gazing at the works of great painters on ceilings, if you know what I mean. Very descriptive and colorful.
Haiku/Senryu / rising sun.
The title is perfect for this. Clear and perfect. Really good picture. I feel as if I visited Alaska. Good job.
Journalism / The Hatred
The picture in my mind as I read this , was quite clear. Except for some errors in grammar, this was poignant and uneasy. On page 2 I would omit "of the knife." It gives a better flow. Any insight as to what the hatred was all about? Any last memories?
I never thought of it quite like that, but a drunken shepherd is going to find himself tumbling down the hillside.
Very informative. Education is one of the most important life experience we can have, and to see it being taken away,little by little is scary. We know that with less education comes more crime. Sometimes I think this country's priorities are messed up. Or should I say "politics." Good article. This could be written for many schools.