mobrownee's profile
AGE:
32
LOC: Brooklyn, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 18
LOC: Brooklyn, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 18
a mother, a lover, a writer, a poet, an educational consultant. which is a snazzy title for a full-time artist without the luxury of touring for big bucks. lol
but i am lucky to work with a community that needs me most. in a lil’ city called New York where the rule is, if it doesn’t kill you – it will make your art stronger.
www.mobrowne.com
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The niece She never treat me no different than the rest My wavy long hair ain’t mess her over none She love me like she made me More than my momma could, I reckon Her smile never parts ways when she see me coming Like the rest of ‘em Say I’m half devil girl Say I think I’m high and mighty Forget we used to play mud pies together And under all that brown sludge – no one could tell us apart Antie love me though Like I ain't never felt Tol' me not to wait for no man Go out and make a way for my...
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i. If this is what I think it is How are we to fall even deeper into Each other with/out Losing something important inside ourselves maintain the core of our family name ii. Struggle has tainted our teeth Eggshell white beige brown Buried beneath tongue And breath I’ve loved you Since we met At first kiss – I knew Heavens don’t split often And when they do Part ways for the meek and un deserving How do we do nothing? iii. Respond with meager shrugs iv. Kiss my temples Read my letters Say you...
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i wonder if he will ever leave her standing in her own shadow cold from lonely skinned knees and teeth cracked from smiling until it hurt like she did him i wonder if it will make sense the pain that blinds you ugly rears medusa locks and snakes swivel turning to the joy of her curves when it was enough just to touch her, then find her scent in your sheets lather her heavy of your want and shoulders never heave in sight the distance wasn't the culprit it was the honesty in it's wake the mile...
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there is never a moment that you will be able to possess completely you wont be able to save yourself or your heart only your memories he will leave you she will leave you with pictures and pets and nothing more than a selfish grin "i told you so" sneer in the wind and the heart wont grow fonder wont think of the bigger picture it will hurt and bleed burgundy pain shining through the chagrin spilling on your lapel staining the picture perfect idea that this shyt works out it dont not until y...
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the silence - is what gets me leaves me rotting like ripened fruit untouched by their hands bruised by the passing of time accompanied by fragmented whispers no sunlight will penetrate my core seeds will fester with little fair for replenshing skin will lose its shine edges loosen and soften with unrequestered gestures still. the silence will remain for dissection within this lonely space
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reads like a fable story. i think you have great start here.
i love the words in the piece. very thick and prose like. which is my favorite. i wish the ending were a bit more biting. but it fits, very nice. it makes me want to check out your portfolio! good luck!
at first, the build was too slow for my taste, the house been described seemed almostg pointless, but then it all came together and i realized it was a tease, matching the mood of the character. i was also confused by the capital letters. what is the significance in that? the last paragraph, was exceptional. i love the scene of her baited breath against the mirror. HOT! i can't wait to read more.
i like the idea of this piece. though the ending was not as strongas the imagery from stanza 2. and blue tear scorched, what does that mean?
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