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LOC: Queens Village, NY
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LAST LOGIN: July 14
LOC: Queens Village, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 14
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Waking Conscious By: K. Wilhelmina Floria 12/10/07 The devil is amused, by all the fools who lose their cool in the arena of shattered dreams. Lost in the lust of want before the must. Pleasing the greedy, that preys on the needy. Concealed in the source, of freedom of choice, full of remorse. Precious jewels, of no value, bursting with diluted morale. It's all about me, can't you see? Material gain, my private fame. Family illusions, a future of confusion. What is joy? An emotional toy? A pa...
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Teardrops, warm cheeks, sea of salt, river of blood. Whistling bullet, instant flood, rippling waves, crashing currents, hollering mama. Quaking earth, winding stones. Erosion, corrosian. Suicide, genocide and a bottle of wine. Electrical flashing, roaring thunder. Hungry, naked, outdoor. Whispering wind. heated haze, blacken sky. Loveless infant, lonely mama. Imprisioned, strung out, abandonded, dead, black powder on the hand. father, other, my brother. k. wilhelmina floria 10/20/93
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Waking Conscious By: K. Wilhelmina Floria 12/10/07 The devil is amused, by all the fools who lose their cool in the arena of shattered dreams. Lost in the lust of want before the must. Pleasing the greedy, that preys on the needy. Concealed in the source, of freedom of choice, full of remorse. Precious jewels, of no value, bursting with diluted morale. It's all about me, can't you see? Material gain, my private fame. Family illusions, a future of confusion. What is joy? An emotional toy? A pa...
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Waking Conscious By: K. Wilhelmina Floria 12/10/07 The devil is amused, by all the fools who lose their cool in the arena of shattered dreams. Lost in the lust of want before the must. Pleasing the greedy, that preys on the needy. Concealed in the source, of freedom of choice, full of remorse. Precious jewels, of no value, bursting with diluted morale. It's all about me, can't you see? Material gain, my private fame. Family illusions, a future of confusion. What is joy? An emotional toy? A p...
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On any warm summer evening the setting sun had shined on the multiple variety of colorful flowers that lined the curb and walk way. The lawn green and freshly cut was watered in the morning to keep the sun from burning it during the day, on hot days the grass recieved a watering in the evening. A 'keep off the grass' sign wasn't needed, you could hear Gran often yelling out the window, "get off my grass!" even stray dogs knew better then to poop in front of the big house without a driveway, i...
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This was a very well written piece I enjoyed the creative flow to it. Your ryhms were masterful.
I really enjoyed this I like it when a Haiku come out clear and makes a point is show real talent. Good luck.
This poem wasn't that clear some of your thoughts seemed to be incomplete and can use some revision. There are some good phrases such as this Sometimes I hear you. I think sometimes you hear me, But they aren’t shared thoughts You have a talent worth shaping just his piece seems to need a little more work.
while lying in the dust of my grand-fathers graves in a language no longer spoken nor understood can be alone search deep down inside of me and mend my broken bones cut the umbilical cord to a world that breeds ignorance with violence Lord, if I live to fight another day please guide my way! I thought the above lines were the best. Very clear and descriptive. This was a powerfull poem, pray if you may. I can hear all the humble you have and it is great in this day with all the madness the dev...
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