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AGE:
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LOC: Riverview, FL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 11
LOC: Riverview, FL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 11
I like to write. I realize I might not be Nora Roberts or some great, fantastic writer, but I still try. Right now, I want to write a book based on the real life events that I have been through. That is all that I have posted. I think alot of what is wrong with it is that I have trouble going back to that time and place and telling you how I felt when this and that was going on, because I do not want to. I do realize I am going to have to do that, and with time I will. So you may not like what I have written, the domestic violence or bi-racial relationship that is so common these days, but I don’t care. My profile picture, is my son who came out of this relationship, along with many other great things that I plan to share with you. And i…
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James was older than I was, much older. He had short shaven blonde hair, with a big belly, and a personality to die for. He could make anyone laugh. I was sixteen and he was twenty-eight. We worked together at the ancient race track that everyone in town went to on Friday night's to try and make it big, though nobody ever would. That didn't really matter much to me though, all that mattered was that I got my fifty bucks and went home at the end of the night. Tonight was different though. Jam...
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You have a good opening here. Keeping me interested and having a good pace. I hope to hear more from this. Good luck.
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Overall, I think you did well on this chapter. I didn't see any spelling or punctuation errors. You have a nice pace and kept the reader wanting more. Good job.
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Wow. I really liked the setting you created and how the begining turned out to really be a dream. It is very interesting and I loved the way you ended it. It kept me wanting to know what is going to happen next.
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