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AGE: 41
LOC: Tempe, AZ
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 24

I will probably just lurk for a while..

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Flash Fiction / The Voice in His Veins
Ceeee-ute! It was nice, even unexpected, that he spared his sisters. "..casual dance of a palmetto tree in the moonlight" seemed a bit romantic for this piece, but it's a good line. It should go into some story, somewhere. From what little I've read of yours so far I am already getting a sense of a theme. After a sickening conversation there is sometimes ice cream, but this time a fun crack about a skynard collection. I like that, because after suffering through a gross conversation I suddenl...
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