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AGE: 24
LOC: Long Beach, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 07

ummm…i’m a mommy…gotta 2 year old boy, he’s a total super angel…i love him to death. let’s see, currently unemployed. not attending school…so we can see not much in that department.

but i love it!!!

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misinterpretations, sedations... struck, maybe even stuck. like lightning so bright. so fucking wrong but so fucking right. mixed emotions like a molotov cocktail. passion in my words, grasping for another touch. out of touch? who knows. hold me in your arms, let my breath your charm. what could be the harm? walking arm in arm. a shoulder to lean on and laugh on. a conversation with words so soft and impressionable. mislead by temptation, but damn it feels good. what's love when only accompan...
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Haiku/Senryu / Random Haiku
Version 1
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Days linger lonely. No one by my side to hold. My fire gone cold. Anticipation Proclamation Sensation Inflation Nation Eyes so deep with shame It's insane this game we claim Emotions disdained Hectic, Ecclectic These lyrics explain mind frame, Speakers bleed logic Rollercoaster Babe Holding on for my dear life Afraid to slow down?
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Version 1
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Soulful Intoxication Lost in the deep pools of your soul… Sinking further in. Loving every bittersweet memory… No longer contemplating if love is true, but submitting and admitting to an intoxication of you r touch… Your very fingertips to die for. Such a sweet taste. To be lost beneath the blankets in a heaven sent euphoria. So hard to breathe… To speak. A moment so fragile hanging in the midst of memories. A body that fits like no other… Knowing know limits for love. Such a gentle soul… So ...
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Version 1
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So poetic Pathetic Waiting In anticipation lacking participation… Skills to communicate Relations, situations, it’s all trivial… The same pain that makes me insane brings me back to reality… Where I came from, who I was Where I am, who I am Where I’m going, who am I going to be…me? It’s so hard to know yourself when your trained to ignore Ignore your emotions Ignore your needs Ignore your passion IGNORE YOU? What an opportunity to delude, seclude, better yet conclude. Trained to understand ot...
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Version 1
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To Mando: Thank you for giving me the strength to go on. I love you. My life My Everything My LOVE MY MAN Damn…so set to intoxicate, me, my heart…what part? Where to start? But wait it’s To late…I’m in love…IT’S SO TRUE…but so fucking new… feelings so intense and unreal. A love held strong through time more defined by our journey we embark. Adulthood. Learning to trust even when we must, entrust, all the fantasies of you, of us Getting hotter, it’s hard to breath…exhale, just relieved your by...
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Poetry / Whispering Winds
i enjoyed your use of adjectives. this to me is a very visual piece of writing. it puts you in the artwork.
Poetry / Empty Void
i really enjoyed this piece, your writing is a very similar style to my own. as we all should try to expand vocab but overall the technical factors are all there.
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you defiently created your characters well as well as the developing plot. I would check some of the wording and grammar but overall i really enjoyed this piece and found myself wanting more of the characters.
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i really enjoyed this peice. it was very refreshing. it's nice to see artist deiscuss their beliefs and religious aspects without being pushy or reptitive.
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