very charming story. The imagery was very good from the mothers rotten teeth to the house filled with frogs. I have to admit as much as I enjoyed this piece I was really confused. In the beginning I thought it was two stories at the same time but then they seemed to come together and there was a lot I didn't understand. What was the relationship with the mother's teeth and the frogs? And is the narrator looking back on a memory or is it happening as it goes?

It's clever but I feel like i've heard the whole "everyone's unique like everyone else" thing before.

Good/insightful quote. But you misspelled breath.

Very original and humorous as hell.

to me this doesn't seem to make a whole lot of sense. Love is one of the biggest selfless concessions one could ever make.

It's a romance, a tragedy, and a comedy in only 6 words. I dig it.

It's deep and emotional but I think it's a little off topic. The 6 word memoir things are supposed to be about your life as a writer.

Did you mean "berserk" instead of "bererk?" I really liked the second half of the first line after the comma. My suggestion is that it may flow a little smoother if you split the first line into two lines because there is already a pause in the middle of it and the longer line wont stick out as much.