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AGE:
21
LOC: Walnut Creek, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 18
LOC: Walnut Creek, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 18
Just another united states sailor with a bad case of homesickness.
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life is like a movie you just walked into 30 minutes late and are trying to figure out and every one around you is saying "sshhhhh!" when you ask them stupid questions and by the time you understand anything it's all over.
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Joy in a Bottle by Michael Seed When life gets me down I grab myself a cold one And spit out my frown
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The Makings of a Man by Michael B. Seed After a dozen phone calls and a few drop offs, the dapper young street pharmacist pulled into his driveway. It had been a good day. Well in a few aspects. Yes he had had a rather smooth evening peddling bammer to wanna’be’s, but he couldn’t get that little girl out of his head. That little girl he had hurt so bad. Not just tonight but before. He couldn’t resist tonight. There was something special tonight. Damian went inside, played an old vinyl Al Gree...
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A Little Boy’s Daniel Boon by Michael B. Seed It’s a powerful thing. Felling the metal gently slide in your fingers Until the click. Out, erect, piercing, Shining. Your knuckles tighten around the cool handle Ready, unflinching. Something inside reaffirms you can. Cool, collective, A killer, and a man. There was a feeling all of us boys had. Some were cowboys, some were Indians, Some were knights, and many fire fighters. I was GI Joe in the forests of Vietnam, With hair on my chest and courag...
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Imperfection by Michael B. Seed If ever there was a scarlet hue I’d pluck it like a flower just for you You would say how quaint When with my words I paint A portrait of the moment when I knew I liked you better So I wrote you a letter Of the time I felt so awkward and blue We were so certain That the velvet curtain Hid us while we prospered in our love so true
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Did you mean "berserk" instead of "bererk?" I really liked the second half of the first line after the comma. My suggestion is that it may flow a little smoother if you split the first line into two lines because there is already a pause in the middle of it and the longer line wont stick out as much.
It's deep and emotional but I think it's a little off topic. The 6 word memoir things are supposed to be about your life as a writer.
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to me this doesn't seem to make a whole lot of sense. Love is one of the biggest selfless concessions one could ever make.
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