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AGE: 20
LOC: Walnut Creek, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 30

I’m joining the Navy and I could not be happier.

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7 Reviews   1 Comment
castles in sand before high tide.
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Humor/Satire / 6 words: writing
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Unemployment leaves a lot of time.
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / 6 words: Live
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with pen or dick in hand
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Quotes / Life
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life is like a movie you just walked into 30 minutes late and are trying to figure out and every one around you is saying "sshhhhh!" when you ask them stupid questions and by the time you understand anything it's all over.
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One for the Winner So many sides but no corners great prides and many mourners all are one and none the same some have won some are to blame
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Poetry / STRESSFUL PAIN
Did you mean "berserk" instead of "bererk?" I really liked the second half of the first line after the comma. My suggestion is that it may flow a little smoother if you split the first line into two lines because there is already a pause in the middle of it and the longer line wont stick out as much.
Short Story / The Last of the Campfire
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Poetry / 6 words
It's deep and emotional but I think it's a little off topic. The 6 word memoir things are supposed to be about your life as a writer.
50.0% Review Quality (2 Votes)
Poetry / 6 words
It's a romance, a tragedy, and a comedy in only 6 words. I dig it.
to me this doesn't seem to make a whole lot of sense. Love is one of the biggest selfless concessions one could ever make.
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Poetry / Daddy's Hand
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / God Bless Old Turkey Neck
Poetry / Abstinence...
Haiku/Senryu / IFO

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