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LOC: Hamilton, OH
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LOC: Hamilton, OH
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He created the heavens and the earth, He formed the complexity of the New Birth. He healed the sick, the dumb, and the lame, He accomplished these miracles for His Father's glory, not fortune or fame. He is the ultimate example of love, peace, and joy. He was sent from above, planted in the east, and was seen as a baby boy. He grew up and became the man that would walk the land, of a people that would worship Him, and then drive nails into His feet and hands. He ...
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Through the specific word use and emotion that I discovered within this poem, I imagined that this was a poetic description of someone who was raped or molested in some way. I feel that this is a deep poem with a great deal of emotional aspects about it. Keep in mind though that the feelings that I expressed in this review are just my feelings. I hope that you are not offended in any way by this. Good work!!
I like your poem.. I like the specific word use that was presented throughout the poem. To me, it's the type of poetry that you can't just read once and or twice and immediately comprehend the feeling that is expressed within the poem.
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