michelle_coes's profile
AGE:
18
LOC: Sharpsburg, GA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 11
LOC: Sharpsburg, GA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 11
Ok first of all, I am just an aspiring poet/doctor. Ever since I was in grade school my life was built on writing and helping others. All my life all I’ve known is writing. Usually my writing is depressing but other times it’s surprising and filled with love stories. Now dont think im a depressed poetry, this is usually just how I express my innermost feelings. Poetry is so inportant to me because I am a quiet person who expresses herself through writing, alot of writing. Writing is life and life is writing.
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When I was 10 I'd wish that my father my knight in shining armour would come and rescue me from the big mean witch I'd wish that my mom would look at me and take me for who I was not who everyone wanted me to be I'd wish that God would send me just a piece of His understanding so that I would know how to cope with pain I wish that my family genuinely loves me and knows that I know I'm not perfect, but I'm trying I wish that those closest to me could see right through my walls and know I that ...
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It's my place to look you in the eye and proudly murmur I love you while I knew in my heart it can't be true It's my place to wait blindly for my moment to come shining not knowing that it had already been stolen by you It's my place to step down to let you pass watch while you grasp the dream, my joy, my pride that I've been waiting a lifetime to pursue It's my place to bend over backwards break my back day and night just for you its my place to be called nigguh heathen, scheming jiggaboo th...
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Staring From Behind the Post Your deep brown eyes floor me Your great wide smile weakens me Your haughty laughter sends chills down my spine. And your strut renders me speechless I admire you, dream about you. I secretly stare at yopu from behind the post Chuckling at you immature actions and dumb jokes. Your bowed legs and crooked smile Reels me in, Like a fish hooked to her favorite meal. I'm attracted to you I find you endlessly interesting You are everything I shouldn't want And yet I can...
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This poem is really great...when it first began I thought it was only going to continue about your infatuation with this person but there was a twist. Although this poem was good and surprising I think it ended to abruptly. I would have liked to have heard more about this sour relationship.
This piece is really nice. It drew me in and I wanted to read more. The only critique I might have is that the ending was kind of abrubt, it ended quickly. I expected a more elaborate ending, all in all, this poem was really nice.
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