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LAST LOGIN: September 24
LAST LOGIN: September 24
i enjoy writing like hell.
i’m not trying to be genuine or original, i’m trying to be real. i’m not going to make up feelings or anything like that, i think that’s trash.
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without purpose without meaning overlook a glowing city for a person i haven't met yet a stranger safe inside a glass box lets nothing in and feels nothing completely content with loneliness how sad and confused she seemed last we talked take her pain, frame it on the wall and still no one would see how much she hurts inside she let love into her glass box and now she's trembling, crying the glass is shattering now she walks a pitch black sidewalk in a city so beautifully distorted her eyes s...
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you only take the steps that you have written out somewhere deep in the mayhem inside your head you've drowned the place out with those compromises holding secrets wanting for them to leave your bed your hand shakes whenever you reach out like some kind of terrible earthquake trembling under the thought of repeated history with hesitation you could easily lose it in your wake not everything is in black or white not one or the other or all or nothing you end up giving more than you get but if ...
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And we all looked up expectantly Waiting for the lunar eclipse And instead the sun and moon only Drifted farther Yeah despite gravity It couldn't be helped An exception to the rules Without any consequences An argument of happiness I wonder if I'll get back my consciousness Pick a number darling, Let's see if I get lucky I thought I was before But the odds were only one to ten And we thought everything was touch and go And even though I'll miss you so I hope that this will just die soon Well ...
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i was just a fool that sweet little kid who you wasted time on i'm suprised it lasted this long i used to be shy but i thought this one time i could be lucky but i'm just clumsy so so much for a jackpot i think i'll just get a job i'm more sure of that than just taking the chance there where we stood in candle light where the world was beautiful i was completely exposed but now i'm trying hard to find reasons to get out of my bed (but) it's hard just to lift up my head touch but just skim ove...
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The future’s spilling from sun The stars are shining in so many ways The paths can be seen infinitely A million at a time just committing suicide If I could then I would Tear down all the trees from this forest And find the fastest way that leads me to you I need something better to cut with than a knife Sipping up these words Yeah I’m choking them down It’s like a needle that goes Straight through my heart So I’ll sit still on my bed And wait for it to go away I forgive and forgive Sometimes...
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i know how this goes, kid. that first stanza is amazingly easy to relate to (for me at least) but from what i read in yours alittle different in my life. the only thing is the language isn't too impressive, so you could work on that just a little bit i guess. haha i like the sarcasm placed in the second stanza too. thanks you for sharing your work!
i really like this piece, the way you described the particular scene was way better (you actually put a vivid picture in my head, not something a lot of people care to do nowadays) than just decent and the ending is amazing (but i'm sorry that you had that happen to you dahlin) i really enjoy this piece, thank you so much for sharing
damn kid. this piece is amazing. i have read a few of your other works, and they are all really amazing. you have an amazing way with your words, very poetic and beautiful. i love how well you can describe this scene, you should be proud :) thank you so much for sharing your work, i enjoy it!
i really like how short and simple this is, anyone could relate to this i believe. i really like the ending, it leaves so much to imagine what really is going on and still the parts before remain true. thank you for sharing your work, i enjoy it :)
well i sure do hope the person that inspired you to write this is feeling better now. and. this actually to me sounded more like a song than poetry, only becuase of some repeated imagery. i found it really interesting how this is about suicide when i could easily relate this to a breakup. the imagery is pretty decent and i like the theme and language you used. i like this piece, thank you so much for sharing :)
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