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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Merocet Chapter 1
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The man hesitated at the door of the cottage, the old lady, if she was still here would most likely be at her bed. Who in their right mind would be awake at this ungodly hour?. The night was bitterly cold, and if it was not for his thick winter cloak he would have frozen solid to the back of his horse. ‘Gods bones’ the man muttered to himself, how had he come to this. Little more than a year ago he had been the envy of all. A beautiful gifted wife, and a child on the way. Life had been good. ...
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Young Adult / Merocet Chapter 6
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Chapter 6 Tristan froze, the hairs on the back of his neck raised in alarm. He had been discovered what next?. He held his breath and felt as if his heart had stopped beating. The man walked over towards Tristan’s hiding place. He wondered whether he should run but his head had resumed its pounding and he decided against it. Besides the man had obviously not been sent by this father, but was he friend or foe?. ‘Don’t worry young man, I will not hurt you, I am not in the habit of smoting child...
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Poetry / Julie
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My friend Jules, Silver grey hair, Bright baby blues, Doris day smile, and Cartier Shoes, My friend Jules.
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Merocet Chapter 1
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1 Review   2 Comments
The man hesitated at the door of the cottage, the old lady, if she was still here would most likely be at her bed. Who in their right mind would be awake at this ungodly hour. The night was bitterly cold, and if it was not for the big thick winter cloak that he was wearing he would swear he would have frozen solid to the back of his horse. ‘Gods bones’ the man muttered to himself how had he come to this, little more than a year ago he had been the envy of everyman. A beautiful gifted wife, an...
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Her name is Holly for the tenth time, But still she calls her Tiffany. She's really cheeky is Tiffany she says. And I roll my eyes in frustration. Does she look in the windows of any more shops? No I say its just Tiffanys. Why does she call the cat, cat? Have you been watching this film? Yes its one of my favourites, She says. Is that Tiffanys Dad? She says. No its her husband I reply. And her name is Holly Golightly. Why does Tiffany see that man in prison? I am losing the will to live. Her ...
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Poetry / Mandarin
I am not quite sure that I am able to give this poem a fair critique. That is not because I don't like it or I don't understand it because I do. It's just that like all poetry, it means different things to all readers. So I will be as honest as I can and will not be afraid of sounding stupid. It was certainly fluent, it flowed very nicely. I read it a few times in order to try and understand the two characters. At first I could not work out if the characters were sharing some sort of dialogue...
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Mercy's Price Chapter 2
This was very good, I really enjoyed reading this and was hooked from the first two paragraphs. It's very well written and flows fluidly with no akward or long sentences. I normally would not read something this long but was compelled to finish the whole chapter. I liked the characters, you describe their physical appearance perfectly without giving too much irrelevant information as some writers do. Also, I did not notice any typos or grammatical errors. I think if there were any I would hav...
Action Adventure / Untitled
I am sure you have already been shown, if not noticed yourself, the couple of typos. So won't bore you with going over old ground. Apart from that this is a very well written piece, very easy to read and the description of the characters movements were formed visualy in my imagination wothout too much effort. I think young adults and teenagers would really enjoy this story. My interest was hooked and I would certainly have read more. Well done and keep it going.
Humor/Satire / prologue, Jesus & Me
This is extremely well written and enjoyable to read. There was nothing I would change, except the part about the pit bull, but that's only because I'm a complete wuss. It was funny and not unlike the fabulous Ben Elton who writes some very funny stuff of a similar nature. I would have liked to have read more and would definately read this if it was ever published, even though it's not my usual thing. Are there any more chapters? I would certainly read and review them. Well done keep with thi...
Humor/Satire / My Thankgiving
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