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AGE: 51
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 02
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"Sweet Legend" Tales of Charity Rackham By: Catherine Watkins Part One What's a girl to do? I was moving to a new town to live with my aunt and uncle, since the passing of my mother. I begged and pleaded with my father to let me stay with him, but he said I needed a proper female influence to help raise me. He said I was quite out of control and he couldn't take care of his duties, raise my three brothers and keep track of me. My father was the Commodore of the shipping docks in...
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Novel Treatments / A Second Chance
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A Second Chance   By: Catherine Watkins             The Stranger   The spring season started off really exciting. I had just finished my last year of schooling and was really looking forward to just relaxing and being totally lazy. But my parents had other plans for me. They expected me to be even more helpful in running the fruit and vegetable stand that was along the highway and working more in the fields to plant and harvest the fruits and vegetabl...
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Non-fiction / Memoir in Six Words #2
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Writing is my dreams coming alive
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When Sam and I had finished going through Aaron's and Casey's clothes and stuff, we decided that we would move into a smaller place. With just the two of us we certainly didn't need a two story, four bedroom home. And besides, it was so lonesome and the house seemed so empty without them. We found a nice one story house near the gym right off the main street and after we had settled in, and since it was spring, we had a huge open house party. Everyone came, even Caleb. It was a blast and I o...
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The first few days of 'Silence' were pretty busy, with everyone getting settled and all the elite soldiers, including myself, were unpacking some of the weapon crates and checking out the annihilation, semi-automatic machine pistols or 'death guns', as we had all nicknamed them. They were so fucking cool! I couldn't wait to try one of them out. But since we were in 'Silence' mode, we had to wait till we were outside to shoot them. Of course, we would have to wait a couple more months, once th...
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / In Plain Sight
Aside from a few spelling errors and capitalization mistakes it's not bad. But for a prologue it doesn't have enough suspense to lead into a crime thriller story. It almost seems like an ending when the police go to open the trunk. There's no clear story line to who the book is going to be about. Since the 'victim' is already going to be rescued, the 'perp' is in the police car and the other bank robber is dead. I would shorten the prologue and give the reader something to 'wonder' about inst...
Awesome, as usual! I love the way Adam and Jeff 'click', even if it's gruesome! I would have to re-read the whole story to see if this fits in properly here, but is 'seems' right. Oh, and I loved 'the perverts' comment! There is some editing that needs done, but nothing beyond that. Can't wait for the next installment! CAT
Poetry / wish...per
Wow, this is great! Very moving and sensual at the same time. Erotic, but not crude in anyway. The only thing I would change is to leave the word, 'even' out of this stanza: 'without ever even being inside' It seems to flow better that way. This is something every woman would love to read and imagine it's written by 'her man'! CAT
Short Story / Dog Days
This was really good. You let the reader feel the hurt and emotions that these two young girls were feeling. The characters were believable and it was easy to 'see' how these poor people lived, by the way you described their house and surrounding area. There was a warm 'down home' feeling that reminded me of a slightly trashier side of the Waltons. Good story! CAT
This is great! I read another chapter of this and was thrilled to read the beginning. You write with clarity and good descriptions of the characters and their surroundings. I was drawn in right away and would love to have this entire book in my collection. CAT