Oh, I wish. You just totally pulled on a sympathetic string in my body.

This one pulled at me under the ribs. At first, Judi's rejection of the little pots you bought for her quite stung, but as the poem goes on, you better understand the reasons behind that and at the end the is a feeling of satisfaction. Sorry if this review isn't very useful (I'm not very good at looking at things in order to dissect them) - I just told you how the poem made me feel. And that's what poetry is supposed to do - evoke thought and emotion.

Oh, wow. I had to slow down and read this over again to absorb every word. There are a few spelling and grammatical problems which sometimes got in the way of the story's flow - you should be watchful of that...although, with such a gut-wrenching story it must be difficult to look objectively at what you're actually typing. If this story is truly based on your own experiences, I'm sorry that this kind of thing could happen to anyone. *wipes tears off keyboard* I'm such a wuss. One line in par...

This is very interesting poetry. It is like prose in style but evokes emotions in the same way poetry does. It definitely made me think about the political situation in my country and I enjoyed the pun in the title. Well done! :)

So true.

I loved this. Amusing, follows rhyme and rhythm patterns, everything the under-appreciated limerick should be. *applauds*

Wow. I came into this story from this chapter, not knowing anything that had happened previously, and now I'm tempted to go and read the rest. Very well written, with balanced tension. You have me interested, which is always the biggest hurdle for a writer...

Wow. Way to grab a reader's attention.

A lovely piece of writing, nothing wrong with it structurally - but it kind of failed to catch my interest straight away. I'm not sure if it's something to do with your writing or just my individual taste, however, so don't take me too seriously. Good luck with your writing!