Haiku/Senryu / Watch What You Haiku

bow with sweetest ease
utilizing the power
the power of muse

An amusing line:
“renga around the rosy”
I also like the

idea behind
this renga. Nice job on this
piece. Happy writing.

-K.S.

Some don’t understand
Haiku review is a gift
More than pat on back

You brought out my muse
This is my thank you for that
Not just three dumb lines

Pity the writer
Who does not see the jewel
Left as offering

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January 24, 2008

by ScottBJohnson

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No. of Reviews	Overall Quality	Comment Followup
930	92.7% (179 votes)	24.8%

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36	M	United States	July 29

renga on my friend
two writers submit haiku
we show how it’s done
muse stirs the word pot
this haiku alphabet soup
gunsarengaku
pity the writers
without imagination
or an open mind

January 24, 2008

by Gunsaku

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No. of Reviews	Overall Quality	Comment Followup
210	89.3% (56 votes)	31.6%

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48	M	Westlake Village, CA	February 06

Where do they find guts
To delete haiku reviews?
Never cross the Muse!

She is a goddess!
Her vengence is terrible
Chronic writers block!

Obviated work
Become irretrievable,
Gone without warning

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