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It surprises me every time.

I am pretty strong, have been an athlete, mostly a ski racer. Man you wouldn’t believe the muscles in my legs. Still don’t have an ass though… I am not real girlie either. I mean, sure I like nice close and I do wear make-up. Yet when I am at the mountain I really don’t shower. I don’t put the make-up on. I love to piss outside. My fantasies are all in terms of cave-people. When I flirt, inexplicably, my language becomes rough. I even sit like a dude when I want to attract one.

I am still a girl though. I will never be as strong as a boy. Never. It just amazes me that I really don’t have much of a defense over a guy. Oh sure, the little ones, I could crush, but I am five feet tall and my powers are useless over that six foot tall football player.

I have realized this situation in more than one instance. I have never been threatened, but I have been tickled. It makes me laugh, sometimes it makes my knee fly into the assailant’s nose, once when I was little, it made me pee. The fact is, though, I cannot get away.

I am a girl.

A lot of girls don’t like me. They don’t understand my anti-feminist ways. It is my beleief that girls are girls and boys are boys. They have never been equal and they never will be. They shouldn’t be. I have my strengths and I know that boys do too. Yes I am rough at times, I do sports, hell, I do what I want, I know that there are things that girls just should not do.

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November 14, 2008

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SGES avatar General Stranger

February 06, 2008

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What surprizes you. I am not sure I like the first line. Can it really stand alone like that?

Why mention your lack of an ass. It doesn’t seem relevent.

close = clothes

Cave people? What do you mean by that? Hairy?

Interesting perspective.

ScottBJohnson avatar General Stranger

January 22, 2008

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Your writing here is pure and simple, and we definitely see inside your head. Good job there.

Well, all things being equal, men are just built to be “physically stronger” than women. At least that’s the theory. Physical strength isn’t everything though… and as any martial artist knows: people who depend on physical strength alone can easily have it used against them. You have plenty of potential to defend yourself from big burly guys.

As far as women being “ladies” and men being “testosterone monkeys”, I think those are very bad stereotypes. People are individuals. You go ahead and do whatever you want. That’s what it’s all about.

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January 22, 2008

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Sounds like you’re full of piss and vinegar,(no offense, pardon the expression) which is good. I admire a person who has a concept of who they are and what they are about.  

MARCH avatar General Stranger

January 21, 2008

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You’re the new version of a girl. Because even though girls do where make and like to dress pretty. Most of them now are trying to do things that separate them from the whole bake and clean thing. I laughed at the part when you said you like to pee outside, because I just had a image of you doing it lol

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January 21, 2008

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Your piece is really good. I wish it would have been longer because I would’ve liked to read some more. You have some typo still: “I like nice close” it’s actually clothes I think.

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