Haiku/Senryu / Dear Kate Bush

You walk immortal
as the eternal dreamer
lost in life’s rapture.

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metaphoricalsimile avatar General Stranger

March 30, 2008

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So these are some pretty words, but aside from the title, don’t seem to have much to do with Kate Bush.

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January 28, 2008

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She has such talent
Others can only follow
Tens to both your goals

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January 26, 2008

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I love Kate Bush, as well as this tribute to her inimitable style! Ten to both of your goals.

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January 26, 2008

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tens for your goals! I feel that these tributes are the next evolution of haiku/senryu. I wonder how you might attribute Jimi Hendrix.

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January 26, 2008

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I’m not sure who Kate Bush is, but I enjoyed this Haiku about her. Nice work. :)

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January 24, 2008

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why kate bush i wonder. Nice haiku.

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January 22, 2008

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Great loved it very much.

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January 19, 2008

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soaring poem, great.

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January 18, 2008

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At first this seemed a little dark, but after reading it a few more time It hit me as a little more light hearted. A person walking on with a head filled with dreams  enjoying life’s glories (rapture). Very pretty. Thank you.

-Rob

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January 18, 2008

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Nice tribute, although the first line isn’t as smooth as it grammatically should be. I like the images this piece provokes.

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