Poetry / Loneliness

Nice start, ‘there’s a hole in my heart that echoes.’ A great ending too, ‘I need someone to talk to.’ I suggest you keep those sandwich ends & find a few interesting ingredients to fill the void, as if you’re going to stuff a turkey, then cook & serve it for a delicious feast. Guests filling their faces with fine food have no need to talk.

I think it is common. This is a very relatable( is that how you spell it?) poem and I like how you interchanged and and where in the middle. Only one complaint, I think you had a typo. I don’t know it could just be me but I think losses should be loses.

sorrow rocks your soul where arms cant reach and words are useless…powerful way to describe being alone, automatically makes me remember times where i have felt the same way, no degree of comfort can actually make u feel better?  its those moments that you have to learn to pick yourself up and writing about it can be a good start! good expression of your emotion.